Killerainbow, The Reader

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Recent Posts

How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 4:31:09 PM

I apologize for wasting your time then, I just really try not to get into arguments online. I'll read it later if you'd like me to though, pm me and I won't forget (I'd read it now but I'm on edge cause of school so I know I'd respond) I'm sure if nothing else I'll benefit by learning your particular style of writing. I really do hope you have a good day.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 4:21:10 PM

Not gonna lie, I stopped reading after the first sentence. I'm not the type of person who gets involved in back and forths. It's really not my thing. You did hit the nail on the head when you said I have selfish motivations, not exactly dealt the best hand in life so I really don't care too much for humanity but that's my problem. Letting you spit on my people without saying anything is just bad conduct on my part which is why I bothered to respond in the first place. I admit my responsibility and apologize for that. If you do want to add to the conversation (about improving poetry) I highly encourage you to do so but once again, you're free to do and speak as you like. Whether or not I respond to you is all me though. In short, sorry I got you to write an essay, I don't care and you shouldn't either, please try to add to the discussion. 


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 4:02:50 PM

...Never mind lol I can tell by your personal profile you enjoy trolling people to get a reaction. Honestly, you got me. I do think you should make an attempt to add more to the discussion rather than provoking people, especially since you probably have a lot to add if you're a seasoned member. You don't seem unintelligent but the fact that you're aware that you're an asshole should motivate you to try and be less of an asshole (my humble opinion) I asked for an opinion on self-improvement, not a very thoughtful and in-depth psychoanalysis of my motivations based on the many, many, many years you've known me. But thanks anyway it's truly appreciated. Please try to keep it on topic though.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 3:49:16 PM

Wait, hold on a second, I can't let you diss my people. Especially when I don't know you.

I'll argue that her post isn't something I'd personally be interested in so I can sympathize with the point you're making. However, if you really think one story you don't like is enough to invalidate the entire point of their org, you should really get a clue. The story next to that is a very relevant piece about the lack of mental health awareness in school.  Maybe you didn't see that or maybe you ignored it to make a point, either way, screw off.

It's a pretty lefty organization, not my cup of tea either, so if you're not the type you probably aren't going to like anything just because of that. But you can't just go around cherry picking stuff so you can just IDK provoke people. To be honest I truly don't care one way or another cause at the end of the day it's your opinion but still, I feel like I can't just let you rag on my people. Rant over.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 3:14:16 PM

Don't care. As long as I get paid for it.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 11:47:57 AM

Nah, I'm also a youth journalist for an obscure non-profit group called We'ced. When we get assignments, like for example reporting on mental health issues, everybody has to do something to cover it.

The only problem is that they think all poetry is good. Basically, no one will tell you if your poetry is bad so you end up looking like a total moron if it sucks.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/9/2018 10:36:48 AM

I checked out the threads and they seem pretty useful. The only specific pointers are probably just like how to make it non-cringe nothing else.

By cringe, I mean like when you read something and feel embarrassed that someone put pen to paper to write it.  Basically I just don't want to humiliate myself.


How to make non cringe poetry? on 4/7/2018 10:01:47 PM

I have a writing job and I've been trying to avoid poetry cause I'm bad at it. Unavoidable situation don't want to crash and burn. Need help please, am willing to give cool points.


Readers Wanted on 4/7/2018 8:59:27 PM

Female... Also I appreciate the comment, but if you're only saying that to me cuz Seto is my friend, minus cool!


Readers Wanted on 4/4/2018 7:21:46 PM

Also, why am I slightly intimidated by you when I don't even know what you look like?