After The "Happy" Part

Player Rating4.98/8

"#181 overall, #13 for 2013"
based on 156 ratings since 09/02/2013
played 2,941 times (finished 204)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

Puzzle

A twisted romantic(if you'd like to think of it that way)/horror story.

 

The loveless man weeps, seeking out his one and only true love. No matter the cost.

He will most defiantly kill, break, and forever change, anyone who stands in his way.

She cries out, "save me!" as she turns to you. The reader.

Be her savior, or killer, lead her through this changes, to happiness, or her death.

Be careful, every choice you make leads her to her fate.

Whether good or bad, click and see.

 

Notes:

Most of the stories are short, but there are many.

I am not the best writer, I know.

Please tell me if there is (if there is any) spelling/punctuation errors. Stuff like that bugs the crap outta me.

Don't ask me questions about this, it's suppose to leave you asking questions.

It's not the most descriptive story, it's not suppose to be, and give me a break, it's my first story game.

Half the time someone will end up insane, so if a character does a strange thing, they're most likely insane.

Enjoy please, I almost gave up on this, so hearing you like it means so much to me.

Player Comments

I enjoyed the experience and it was only slighted detracted by a few grammar and spelling errors, otherwise it is well written and, though it could be a bit more descriptive, it wasn't bad. A little less gruesome than I had hoped, but my expectations are generally far fetched for horror stories, I like them, but they do not affect me in the slightest so don't take it personally.
-- DeathIncarnate on 7/26/2015 7:08:40 AM
An amazing story, one that I enjoyed immensely. Not too long, not too much text on each page, well-written and twisted. One of my favourite stories on the site, may I say. One error that I found:
"Her lips formed a strait line."
Where 'strait' should be straight.

Also I think that sometimes your writing was slightly confusing, maybe use names instead of lots of 'he' and 'she'.
-- insanebutvain on 8/26/2014 6:53:56 PM
Short,but enjoyable!
-- Creepyguy735 on 12/27/2017 9:02:46 PM
Well, although it is short, it's pretty good.
-- Watwat on 7/14/2017 11:28:33 AM
This was interesting, I guess. The beginning is a bit strange but the rest of the story showed what's going on. Fix the grammar errors, and you'll probably get higher ratings.
-- crazygurl on 7/12/2017 7:01:43 PM
Though this story was relatively short, it was definitely well thought.

5/8
-- Snowflame on 4/13/2017 9:16:38 PM
I think its good for people with a deep mind and likes murder other than that if you don't like blood and death I do not recommend reading amazingly frightening but awesome story
-- ?? on 2/3/2017 11:00:16 PM
Ok story. So-so.
-- Quorrah on 12/20/2016 6:31:17 PM
okkk
-- kk on 9/1/2016 9:18:17 AM
What is up with the end
It's just crazy
-- Crazycraft316 on 8/14/2016 7:21:27 PM
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