Any reasone?

Player Rating3.09/8

"#524 overall, #73 for 2013"
based on 129 ratings since 08/02/2013
played 1,430 times (finished 133)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Your a women whose life is twisted.

( Light horror not much but still theres a bit)

Warning:May not be proper for people under 18.

Either way its a short story so it wont take much time so enjoy!

I was inspired by the three wise monkeys (don't see,hear or talk)

It`s my first published story so go easy on me if i have published this in the wrong category or maturity level.

Player Comments

First of all, grammar. Second of all, more explanation as to the murder of your parents or the rape scene. I get that your brother knocked you up, but why does your sister not do anything about the murder? It is a really good plot and I feel that if you worked on it you could really have something. Also, please correct the title. I do believe you are onto something, so I gave you a 6/8. Do some serious touchups, though. Okay? Thank you for considering my comments.
-- jamescoker1226 on 6/13/2014 11:31:49 AM
Dark stories like this can be really good when written well, but this story really needs more explanation of the situation you're in and how you got there. For instance, if your brother murdered your parents, why aren't the police involved? Especially if your sister knows he did it. Also there were a lot of spelling mistakes, which is why it's always important to proofread your stories before you publish them.
-- Briar_Rose on 2/6/2014 7:05:08 AM
Short but dark as heck! The typos were aggravating and I'd like to have been able to delve more into the back story and find out more.
-- LuvLee on 6/20/2018 9:13:34 PM
Twisted...
Just Twisted...
-- Mistery on 3/17/2018 2:11:09 AM
Foremost are the grammar and spelling issues. These are easily fixed. The subject matter is pretty intense and provocative, but does need more depth. Kudos for having the spunk to address such a dark subject.
-- Weinerpuppy on 8/9/2017 4:56:34 PM
I think the person who wrote this is mentally ill.

Use a spell checker for your incest rape stories please.
-- CastIron on 3/1/2017 4:39:16 PM
I had a difficult time really enjoying the story. Usually I can look past grammar as long as it is sparse, but this was littered with it like kitty litter.
If writing is your passion then please continue to pursue it! Maybe just ask a friend of a stranger to edit it. :)
-- MysteriousMystery on 2/28/2017 4:47:47 PM
Greatest game ever...
-- Matato101 on 2/3/2017 11:28:42 AM
Pretty dark, yes. Works for what it is, but it really needed more choices. There's not a whole lot to rate here.

But the main issue is the number of punctuation issues. I don't think this was proofread at all. Even the title has a typo, FFS.
-- mizal on 12/4/2016 6:58:04 PM
I close my ears?

It was ok I guess... 3/8.
-- MinnieKing on 12/4/2016 2:43:52 PM
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