Broken Wings

Player Rating3.82/8

"#327 overall, #43 for 2012"
based on 128 ratings since 01/20/2012
played 1,424 times (finished 176)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Just a short game about a bird trying to find its master. Sort of sad.

Player Comments

This is one of those games that makes me feel all sad ;-;

You did a really good job fleshing it out, and I could really feel for the bird, and feel sad and bad about what happens to it.

This storygame has an interesting plot, and although it was short, I liked the writing and the style of the author. I would read more from this author in the future.

That being said, I found this storygame to repeat itself a bit, which is a bit annoying and boring, but I guess it was still a good read overall.

Like some of the other comments say, it was inspiring. I really want to grow wings and injure one of them and then go on this adventure to see what it's like xD

3/8, good job but not the best.
-- MinnieKing on 3/2/2017 7:00:08 PM
I liked this game, it was sad and nice to see things realistically from a wounded animal's point of view. Within it's limits it was a good short-story game :)
-- Will11 on 3/11/2015 6:03:17 AM
I liked it. Not the best story, but a fair game, good even. I think you got the feeling you went for. Could have been longer, but I appreciate it for what it is. I look forward to seeing some longer works.
-- Trywm on 1/26/2012 9:06:29 PM
It's a tale of heartbreak, of abandonment, of false love, of false hope. I understand the bird's pain, it's quite a beautiful story that doesn't receive the praise it deserves.
-- unstableLoyalty on 6/17/2017 1:22:44 AM
It's poetic, perhaps some people don't understand that with such a low rating... it deserves higher.
-- unstableLoyalty on 6/17/2017 1:14:34 AM
Yikes. This story is short but hits you right in the feels. Almost every ending ends in death, and the only other option seems to end in implicated death (I think).
-- Saika on 3/19/2017 12:43:53 PM
It's not that I have no heart, it's just I don't see how this is sad.
-- sweetief0x on 12/29/2016 3:00:52 PM
Whaaaaa. Only one ending where you don't die! Did you know: Happy ends do exist!
-- Girl America on 6/27/2016 6:17:04 PM
But... But...

That was so sad!!!

It was so good, and detailed... But so sad!

I give it a 5/8
-- jster02 on 6/11/2016 8:06:09 PM
Man... although that was sad, it also was inspiring. I'm actually pretty glad I played through this.
-- white_wolf on 5/8/2016 2:48:33 PM
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