, #43 for
played 1,749 times (finished 212)
"walk in the park"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Just a short game about a bird trying to find its master. Sort of sad.
This is one of those games that makes me feel all sad ;-;
You did a really good job fleshing it out, and I could really feel for the bird, and feel sad and bad about what happens to it.
This storygame has an interesting plot, and although it was short, I liked the writing and the style of the author. I would read more from this author in the future.
That being said, I found this storygame to repeat itself a bit, which is a bit annoying and boring, but I guess it was still a good read overall.
Like some of the other comments say, it was inspiring. I really want to grow wings and injure one of them and then go on this adventure to see what it's like xD
3/8, good job but not the best.
on 3/2/2017 7:00:08 PM
I liked this game, it was sad and nice to see things realistically from a wounded animal's point of view. Within it's limits it was a good short-story game :)
on 3/11/2015 6:03:17 AM
I liked it. Not the best story, but a fair game, good even. I think you got the feeling you went for. Could have been longer, but I appreciate it for what it is. I look forward to seeing some longer works.
on 1/26/2012 9:06:29 PM
Aww, this is so sad! I love this!
on 11/7/2018 2:16:08 PM
This was such a sad story...I wish the bird pecked out his master's eyes. Stupid master.
-- Skool on 1/8/2018 5:42:26 PM
on 12/6/2017 11:34:23 AM
It's a tale of heartbreak, of abandonment, of false love, of false hope. I understand the bird's pain, it's quite a beautiful story that doesn't receive the praise it deserves.
on 6/17/2017 1:22:44 AM
It's poetic, perhaps some people don't understand that with such a low rating... it deserves higher.
on 6/17/2017 1:14:34 AM
Yikes. This story is short but hits you right in the feels. Almost every ending ends in death, and the only other option seems to end in implicated death (I think).
on 3/19/2017 12:43:53 PM
It's not that I have no heart, it's just I don't see how this is sad.
on 12/29/2016 3:00:52 PM
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