Broken Wings

Player Rating3.64/8

"#573 overall, #48 for 2012"
based on 165 ratings since 01/20/2012
played 2,075 times (finished 235)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Just a short game about a bird trying to find its master. Sort of sad.

Player Comments

This is one of those games that makes me feel all sad ;-;

You did a really good job fleshing it out, and I could really feel for the bird, and feel sad and bad about what happens to it.

This storygame has an interesting plot, and although it was short, I liked the writing and the style of the author. I would read more from this author in the future.

That being said, I found this storygame to repeat itself a bit, which is a bit annoying and boring, but I guess it was still a good read overall.

Like some of the other comments say, it was inspiring. I really want to grow wings and injure one of them and then go on this adventure to see what it's like xD

3/8, good job but not the best.
-- MinnieKing on 3/2/2017 7:00:08 PM with a score of 0
I liked this game, it was sad and nice to see things realistically from a wounded animal's point of view. Within it's limits it was a good short-story game :)
-- Will11 on 3/11/2015 6:03:17 AM with a score of 0
I liked it. Not the best story, but a fair game, good even. I think you got the feeling you went for. Could have been longer, but I appreciate it for what it is. I look forward to seeing some longer works.
-- Trywm on 1/26/2012 9:06:29 PM with a score of 0
Well I wasn't expecting that ending honestly.
-- storytime82128 on 10/30/2019 3:30:16 AM with a score of 0
Aww, this is so sad! I love this!
-- caitm on 11/7/2018 2:16:08 PM with a score of 0
This was such a sad story...I wish the bird pecked out his master's eyes. Stupid master.
-- Skool on 1/8/2018 5:42:26 PM with a score of 0
-- Battleclaz44 on 12/6/2017 11:34:23 AM with a score of 0
It's a tale of heartbreak, of abandonment, of false love, of false hope. I understand the bird's pain, it's quite a beautiful story that doesn't receive the praise it deserves.
-- unstableLoyalty on 6/17/2017 1:22:44 AM with a score of 0
It's poetic, perhaps some people don't understand that with such a low rating... it deserves higher.
-- unstableLoyalty on 6/17/2017 1:14:34 AM with a score of 0
Yikes. This story is short but hits you right in the feels. Almost every ending ends in death, and the only other option seems to end in implicated death (I think).
-- Saika on 3/19/2017 12:43:53 PM with a score of 0
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