Player Comments on Celestial Lies: Chapter Two
I played through it a few times...
This is quite disappointing, because chapter one was a lot better then this. I understand making part ones, part twos, etc can sometimes make it feel like you need to publish things as soon as possible, but please spend more time on your storygames.
I loved chapter one, but this had a large drop in quality, for many reasons, such as a more boring plot, a very confusing writing style, less detail, and very undesriptive events.
There were mutiple errors throughout this storygame. Proofreading is very crucial, and compared to chapter one, this was lacking emotion, detail, character development...
I think you should have spent more time on this, because it feels as if it was written by a completely different person in all honesty.
3/8, a step down. Try harder please.
on 3/21/2017 12:23:29 AM with a score of 0
This is a serious drop in writing quality from Chapter One of Celestial Lies. While it's not terrible, the writing is sloppy (eg. "Just a few hours, you were finding freedom" has no "ago" in it) and doesn't keep me interested.
The narrative was confusing. I'm not entirely sure how we ended up here after the events of Chapter One, but I rolled with it. Again, the storygame was very linear. I appreciate that you've actually put in some proper choices that don't lead to instant death, but there's still only one way to "win" this storygame.
on 3/3/2013 10:59:28 AM with a score of 165
This is a very significant step down from your first part of the series. Not only are all of the problems from the first part still prevalent but your major strength from part 1 (the quality of the writing) is not a strength here. This story is fraught with grammatical errors and especially numerous tense errors. This was carelessly edited and squanders much of the potential that the series carried.
on 11/19/2012 5:58:49 PM with a score of 130
I gave you a 5. I highly recommend you add pictures for items
on 9/10/2017 6:53:43 PM with a score of 130
Well, is it a way to defeat the fiend in the portal???
on 8/14/2017 5:04:37 AM with a score of 130
It was too short. I didn't read half of text because I found the text not interesting. It progresses to fast.
on 3/9/2013 8:49:33 AM with a score of 630
pretty fun. cant wait till the next one
on 12/17/2012 12:29:40 PM with a score of 630
Cool story, but where are my friends from the first game, and how did I get in a desert?
on 10/21/2012 8:58:28 PM with a score of 600
good bye cruel world i dead now!
on 10/12/2012 4:59:26 PM with a score of 100
This seems shorter than the first, but still, good writing.
on 8/4/2012 12:14:53 PM with a score of 630
It's an alright story. Might of been a bit more interesting if it was longer.
on 6/11/2012 5:31:40 PM with a score of 115
on 6/2/2012 12:44:53 AM with a score of 100
Sweet game, but it is so short you should only be able to use the knives 2 or 3 times.
on 5/22/2012 8:15:41 PM with a score of 630
Nice one once again, hope I got the best score. Let's see...
on 3/7/2012 11:48:58 PM with a score of 630
you could've done so much better :(
on 9/18/2011 5:53:32 PM with a score of 680
it was ok kinda simple
on 9/16/2011 11:40:26 PM with a score of 630
I like it. 5/8
on 9/13/2011 10:17:49 PM with a score of 100
Pretty good. Keep up the good work!
on 9/12/2011 1:01:54 PM with a score of 130