Claire of Lune

Player Rating4.38/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 38 ratings since 11/22/2017
played 30 times (finished 10)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

This was an entry for the Chaos Contest. Now it's just here for you to enjoy.

 

A frozen winter can be akin to Hell
So listen to this story that I will tell
Crazies throw the world into Chaos today
There's no way for me to keep evil at bay

Crazies should give you fright
Especially their bite
While the men act like beasts
Wanting tomorrow's feasts

Player Comments

based on 29 ratings since 11/22/2017
played 1 times (finished 0)
your rating: unrated

Not much to comment about the game itself, but... how could there be 29 ratings when it is only played 1 time and finished 0?!
-- TestingJest on 12/9/2017 12:40:05 AM
Excellent writing, but I want to know what happened to Claire's mother and how the place came to be like that—wrecked and with crazies running around. The story really pulled me in. :D
-- Crescentstar on 9/16/2017 12:44:35 PM
Well written though as a story it feels more like a prologue than a complete entry.
-- march5th00 on 5/10/2017 2:05:37 AM
Holy cosmos, am I sleep deprived or drunk? Only idiots think you can fire a bow. Sorry Wibbins, don't know what that was about, but I'm going to have to re-read every entry I've read today from your story on. Brain running in reverse. Been a long week...
-- Bucky on 5/5/2017 6:40:51 PM
Wibbins, I am deeply disappointed. A girl does not shoot a bow. A girl looses or fires a bow.
-- Bucky on 5/5/2017 2:27:19 PM
Reminds me of Romero
-- Alaa on 5/1/2017 4:14:21 AM
I forgot to replace the first page's title with "The 1902 Winter in the American West". I won't modify the story until the contest is over, but I figured that information would make the story slightly less confusing.
-- WouldntItBeNice on 4/29/2017 6:28:49 PM
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