Player Comments on Dawnwood
It took a bit before the story really hit its stride, but it slowly unfolded into a really entertaining horror story. There are a lot of bloody, gruesome ways to die - in fact, there's just a lot of blood and gruesome things in general - but the reveal of Dawnwood as a town with a dark secret was very well done, and some of the endings were very satisfying.
The characters are somewhat stock for the genre and don't seem to have all that much depth, so it reads a bit like a cliché young adult romance at first. I was worried, at first, that it would be taking the Twilight route, but then the second half - which was far more plot heavy - kicked in, and the story took a sharp turn for the better. Or, the more macabre, but that's a good thing, given the genre.
All in all, I had fun, there was definitely a sense of horror and dramatic tension, and the story was expansive and long enough to keep me playing for quite a while. Some more proof-freading would help, since there are mistakes here and there, and a little more characterization would help make the plot more compelling, but it's not bad. Not bad at all.
on 3/2/2016 5:13:30 PM with a score of 0
Great Story, but the grammar is atrocious! This story has quite a bit of potential, but is filled with errors and misused words. Keep trying!
-- xxtabxx on 4/14/2020 5:07:03 AM with a score of 0
It's good but too short !
-- Kuro on 3/7/2019 5:35:32 AM with a score of 0
on 9/1/2018 6:09:01 PM with a score of 0
I found around 5 endings and all I have to say is that you Sir... are THAT DUDE.
on 3/16/2018 12:10:18 PM with a score of 0
This definately made me happy! I'm a bit weird in that I really enjoy creepy and horror-based stories and artwork, and this just brightened my day (or darkened, theoretically) I would really enjoy playing either an update yo the game or a sequel or prequel. Hope you come out with one (or both) soon!
on 11/25/2017 12:26:23 PM with a score of 0
I liked this book. It had a good storyline, but I do wish that it was longer. Anyway, nice job.
on 5/22/2017 10:08:05 PM with a score of 0
Even with few typos and inconsistencies it was not bad at all. I liked the story but I felt that it ended prematurely.
-- John Cury on 2/20/2017 10:22:32 AM with a score of 0
This was definitely creepy. Hazel ended up getting pregnant with the key bearer and managed to escape from the dead man twice. She also managed to lure the beast to the cultist and live through it all. This girl was pretty tough. I really liked it though.
on 1/8/2017 1:51:21 AM with a score of 0
Good story. Enjoyable. :)
-- Quorrah on 12/20/2016 5:33:54 PM with a score of 0
Other than a few typos here there this is a very well crafted story with lots of choices!
on 9/8/2016 1:30:54 PM with a score of 0
Very good, but wow, it really is a horror
on 9/6/2016 8:04:46 PM with a score of 0
6/8 Cool story. A few mistakes here and there. Seems like a lot of choices but many of them lead to the same outcome. However it was fun to play and well thought out. Good job
on 8/23/2016 11:08:53 AM with a score of 0
I love it! Many ways to die.
on 3/31/2016 10:12:08 AM with a score of 0
I like it, but why does Hazel act like a jackass? I like the story and characters though.
on 3/16/2016 11:00:05 AM with a score of 0
It was interesting, but kind of linear.
on 3/5/2016 12:27:22 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed this story, it reminded me of the Point Horror stories I used to read when I was a little Will11 (they're basically Goosebumps for teens). I think you should definitely write more of these sort of stories, this one's a perfect little ghost story for a long winter's night when it's cold outside and the wolves are howling in the distance... (where am I?... :) )
on 3/3/2016 5:38:55 PM with a score of 0
This story is a wonderfully demented mixture of hysteria, madness, psychosis which is covered in a bloody vomit of evil. H. P. Lovecraft would have been proud.
on 3/2/2016 10:21:32 PM with a score of 0
Creepy-ass story, but great plot and character development. Loved it!
on 3/1/2016 7:34:42 PM with a score of 0