Player Comments on Die Zombie! Die! Pt II

Funny but short, there should be more endings and routes

It was pretty good but the huge amount of items and the lack of detail made me less interested than I would have been.

Well, it’s a decently written game, although there are some points that I would like to address.

The plot is unique enough, you start out in a prison complex, and escape with a person. The zombies are decently described, but the branching is a little lacking. It almost seemed like a win or lose situation sometimes. There were also really forced deaths, such as the one where you get bitten by a poisonous snake after going to pee in the brush.

I would like to see more of the emotion and thoughts of the main character, and some description of most characters, not just “small” for Taylor and such.

One thing that really concerned me was the amount of items in the game. It does give it some interactiveness, but sometimes it messes with your links(ex. Shotgun, bus driver/guard). As others have mentioned, there could’ve been more description and hints in the car part, it would be nice to have the readers go on instead of being stuck at one point, as this would give more playtime and enjoyment if they found the following pages entertaining enough.

Another thing. Fonts. Most of the time, I like my words to be even, the same fonted, and black unless there is a special page, there are times that call for this. It leaves the impression(at least to me) that it is messy, and unstructured.

Because this is a zombie game, there has to be even more description for the zombies. Take an example from dead man walking: “The teen girl only has a large gash across her stomach, where you can see some of her insides…. you give it the hardest double overhand swing you can muster just as it lunges to grab you. The force of the blow instantly crushes its head down to its nasal cavity and showers you in an explosion of the contents.”

Of course I don’t mean to necessarily get too gory, but a good, well described zombie scene can really do some good for both the reader, and you.

All in all, a solid story, keep up the good effort!

nestle

lol

It's a pretty good game, but the car part was confusing. Btw, if anyone is stuck on the car part, you need to throw everything out the window. Then, you'll be able to pass that part. If you don't get an option that says you're out of ideas, then you probably forgot to pick up something before the car part and need to restart the game.

Yaaay after throwing everything out the window-i wow

That car part was so confusing.

It was a nice game a kind of challenging good job

A great game but I DID have lots of trouble at the [SPOILER]





Zombie horde part with the car

Love it. It is one of the best games I played.

It's an amusing, entertaining game. Not amazing but, as I said, pretty good.

To be honest,the pictures and the ability to use those items is really cool.It helps to visually make the game more interactive.Though I did get killed (turning the car around instead of driving through the zombies)it was a pretty fun game.I'm not sure if most games on here use pics or not as this was the first game book I chose to read.Anyways,I thouroughly enjoyed the game and I'm gonna try again.Good Job!

Spoiler!!!!! I had disposed of the urine cup and yet it showed up again later as the only way for me to win. ???

Yay lol? I completed it.

much much better than the first even more loveable can't wait for part 3 i heard it's even better LOL as if that where possi- OHH MY GOSH THE 3RD ON IS SOOOOOO MUCH BETTER!!!

Takes forever to figure out how to ram through the zombies ;)

I'd like this game more if it had more options and a better ending. Goofy but decent.

Cool ??

This game was amazing and fun
Good job man

Wow, did anyone else spend 30 minutes trying to figure out the zombie crowd?

Interesting story, good use of items. Not a bad plot line, and the characters in the story seemed original. 4/8

Didn't give any choices that actually effect the game... leads to same ending no matter what you do... poorly written as if in haste

Great job! :D

Took me FOREVER to get through the crowd of zombies. But I made it! Nice game!

so u have to die in the game huh.

Better then the first....but I miss my cup :(

It was good, but I wish that items played more of a role than they do now.
Though I really did like the writing.

hmmm. better than the first.

I loved the chocolate and the zombie thing it made my day XD!
Great work by the way!

oh come on not this crap you will all die!

YOU MONSTER! making me throw out perfect foods :(. Isn't it the weakest that die first in zombie Apocalypse? why would the mentally unstable live though zombies? I'd think they'd be first to go.

Why would anyone want to leave a fortress in a first place? Zombies would never get inside a prison..unless big ugly SOB with bigass hammer is with them :-) (RE)

I miss that cup. ;_; :: cries eyes out::

With the whole 'I need to pee' thing, you end up dying no matter what you do... Like come on. It wouldn't even let me use the cup.

Not bad

I got bit in the desert peeing lol

good

..........HOTWIRENESS

cool story

Should have more zombie scenes

still crappy. gawd, not much improvement in maturity.

I like this one it was better than the first.

great

I miss my cup...

Okay.

To short

This Is Nicer Than The First One :)

So you gather up a bunch of stuff just to lose it all? Where's the fun in that? Or am I missing something?

.it was ok.

i can finally find a good zombie game!

Wow that's better then the original and funnier too.

Nice

I'm sure gonna miss that cup. Lol, poor candy.

you need at least more items.......

lol it was awesom!

good ending now i have to escape the city

Loved it

best game ever and number 1 was kool to

Its pretty good to get your mind off of things or remind you on how much of a zombie fan you are like me.

dude this game was frekin awsome you make great games make a chapter four i played three just make everthing different please dude your amazing

Hmm... odd, what was the food for? I liked it none the less.

even better than the first good job need to remember a few things from 1 though

This game has a certain charm to it, and the last puzzle mustered a chuckle out of me. I found a *bit* too linear for my liking though, and it was quite amazing how easy it was to kill people, hijack a prison bus, etc.

it was better than the first 7/8

this game was ok but definitely not better than the first.

one word fun

These games are awesome.

That was better than the first one

Wait. Wasn't there a code at the end of the first "Die Zombie! Die!" game that was to be used in this game? Why wasn't it incorporated?

That was better than the first! If it weren't for the grammar, I would have rated it an 8.

ermm.......... very easy to me but still pretty good

I got bitten by a snake and didn't even get to see zombies yet.

Funny. Preparing for escape, but ending up throwing it all out the window... this is one of the best games I've ever played.

it was a very good story but it was a bit quick

That was fun. Much better than the first one.

It was good. It wasnt as funny as the last one though. I liked the last part though.

Nice ^_~

Nicely done.

Great game although I wish the nestle chocolate was real

it was cool

And now for a limited time, comes with brush to wipe off the poop from whcich comes from your butt when you poop on it because that's what its made for!

wow im going to play the other one these games r addicting! I am just glad I won this one. I still have the same question about the first one.

Lots and lots of wierd things. I have to say that this one is a little linear.

its long, not good if ur in a rush, but if ur bored shitless, meh, worth a go

Great game. Very very funny

very simple, very fun. a possible honorable mention.

Yes awesome- the bushes things wasn't the most clearest thing inthe world but the hint was obviously there.

I must be missing something I keep dying in the bushes

Very, very good sequel. I would have wanted more chances to kill zombies with weapons, like the first one, but the way you made it it's still awesome. Well done!

Nice game although i wanted 2 keep the candy!!!

More of a great thing! Make sure to play the first one first (you don't have to, but you know, it helps). My comments are the same: funny, well written, and great gameplay. Good job!!!! I hope to see more.

much better depth than the first one. nice improvement.

Oh well, at least now i get to be a zombie with a shotgun!

It is to ezay to die make it harder to die

LOL This game was so funny! Down with Rice Crispies! It was a little linear, but still great! Good job Miccy. This deserves a second and quite possibly third play!

Great Game, very engoyable. Could use some fixing up, but you have made a nice game!