Player Rating5.21/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 88 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.


Your name is Gabriel Smith and you are a Terran mech piliot. The evil and corrupt Lichan Empire has put into motion their plan for global domination. You alone can stop them, but is that what you really want to do? The choice is ultimately yours.

Player Comments

It was a very short story. I expected there to be a lot more to the story. There are still a few grammar and spelling corrections that need to be made.
-- Anonymous on 7/1/2016 5:25:12 PM with a score of 0
BEST FRIGGING THING IN DA WORLD!!!!!! Awesome story. Wish it was longer.
-- TK0805 on 2/16/2016 9:23:15 AM with a score of 0
I liked this story, I only wish it was longer though.
-- corgi213 on 8/26/2015 8:22:34 AM with a score of 0
I am one evil son-of-a-bitch >:D
-- TheFluentReader on 4/9/2015 12:28:11 PM with a score of 0
Really anticlimactic it's good but it should be longer
-- priryan123 on 2/13/2015 4:55:01 PM with a score of 0
Good story. Engaging from the start.
-- Jordi P on 9/25/2014 12:51:22 PM with a score of 0
Needs to be expanded. Pretty anti-climatic ending.
-- ArrowzworrA on 7/12/2013 10:23:37 PM with a score of 0
Good plot idea that could be great if expanded.
-- steve1959 on 6/1/2013 9:43:16 AM with a score of 0
Great Game! Lots of action.
-- harrypotter on 5/17/2013 7:11:49 PM with a score of 0

It's pretty damn good.
-- Zane on 11/18/2012 2:04:33 AM with a score of 0
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