Jokestar! With Vines!

Player Rating1.31/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 23 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

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WARNING: This is all supposed to be a joke! Also, prepare for falling out of your seat from laughter!

Player Comments

THE BEST THINGY EVER!
-- kingender5 on 10/23/2015 2:22:13 PM
THIS IS a-MAZE-ing! Any ways, I said this was joke so shut up those idiots being meanies. *Sniff Sniff*
-- kingender5 on 10/21/2015 2:50:52 PM
Vines:
So, already I know that this is either going to be absolutely genius or completely fucking stupid...

9+10:
Oh god, not this shit... It's going to be one of those lolrandom, "look, I know what's going on on the internet and shit" things that I was hoping died out in 2007. At least 2007 used adorable rage comic faces!

John Cena and an unoriginal Yo Mama joke, nearly one right after the other:

Well, you can come up with ridiculous unfunny vine comedy, so I'll bring in some ridiculous unfunny memes, then!
I was going to give this story a 2/8... AAAAAAAaand the other point's gone. If you could focus on improving the quality of your work and removing the 'Lolrandom' aspects, that'd be great.
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 10/20/2015 11:51:17 AM
I did not find this funny. if you do, then ... well, lucky you, you find everything funny.
-- Mayana on 10/20/2015 10:55:08 AM
not funny enough i only smiled... :)
-- TheDragonsTheyGo on 10/20/2015 7:34:31 AM
I'm sorry, I didn't laugh. Its just not funny. But keep trying anyway! Maybe if you search up online other funny things, and keep testing them out on here. If a lot of people laugh, you can find a bunch of similar jokes like that one and then it will make people go crazy! Find what ppl like :3
-- Blazewhisker on 10/19/2015 9:03:23 PM
I think this sort of over-hyped stand up comic thing would work better if you gave the reader a choice of retorts so it didn't just feel like we were being abused by low grade humour (Yo Mama jokes aren't quite Oscar Wilde now are they?), the level of enthusiasm is good but it came across like those enthusiastic door to door salesmen who say things like "this carpet cleaner will change your life!"

Get some stronger material together, include more of it and this could be pretty funny: the idea is a good one :)
-- Will11 on 10/19/2015 8:38:52 PM
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