Mayana, The Apprentice Scrivener

Member Since

3/22/2015

Last Activity

2/20/2019 2:06 PM

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1,863

Post Count

870

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

115 wins / 129 losses

Order

Sage

Commendations

16

Hello!
I'm a blind teenager from Slovenia. Most of my time here is spent reading stories or writing stupid things on the forums, but I sometimes write short stories and poems as well. English isn't my first language, so any feedback is welcome! Up for a duel anytime.
Have a nice day, Mayana.

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Recent Posts

Dead Chat on 2/18/2019 10:52:54 AM
You don't have Discord? How unfortunate. There truly is no way to fix this ... oh, except maybe you could just go here? I managed to install and use it without even looking at the screen once! You can do this!

Poll: Swift Execution or Public Stoning? on 2/13/2019 8:23:42 AM
I vote for public stoning. It might not be the nicest or most moral choice, but who cares? It's good fun for almost everyone involved.

50 words story thread. on 2/11/2019 4:42:50 PM
This was great! What? Someone had to say it! Think before you comment, guys. You wouldn't want to make Flux sad, would you? The bit about the thighs doesn't really seem like a vital piece of info, but I guess you had to get enough words somehow. Perhaps, instead of "strangers peer" you could've used "a stranger peers". Right now you have stranger, then suddenly there's a he. Sure, it's mostly clear he's one of the strangers, but it is an unusual way to word it.

Think about others before you comment on 2/11/2019 3:48:55 PM
Hmm. Why do I get the feeling that all this whining is going to accomplish exactly the opposit of what you want? I left another comment on your story, not all that mean, where I basically said again what people've already been telling you so that you'd maybe understand better this time. Now I regret not making it more mean, just because of all this complaining. The comments you're crying so much about weren't even that mean. Usually, such a short and half assed story would get much worse! Welcome to the internet, pal. If you publish something online, other people will see it. And if they think it's terrible, they'll let you know. There are communities that try to be super nice and supportive. However, if you'd have browsed CYS for even a few minutes before you chose it, you'd have realized that it's not that sort of place. Were your feelings hurt? Unfortunate. Press alt+f4 and go read a book or take a walk outside to relax. But even if you still think you are the right one here after that, that's no reason to react like this. This no doubt isn't the first time your feelings were hurt, and it won't be the last one. You'll need to learn to control yourself so you don't post plenty of comments complaining that you're offended. That'll only make people hate you more.

50 words story thread. on 2/8/2019 1:48:48 AM
I'm sorry, I must've made it unclear. I cut the second two because I'd have 51 words otherwise, and I thought it'd be clear in context. The roomate gets the two top shelves, but she decides to share everything she has. Should've just kept that two and cut something else.

50 words story thread. on 2/6/2019 10:56:38 AM
I quickly realized that this one isn't funny and doesn't make much sense, but hey, can't let the thread die! “The bottom two shelves of the fridge are mine, the top yours. The middle one’s for anything we decide to share,” I told my roomate. After putting in her groceries she asked, “Can we change that rule?” “Why?” “I can’t put everything on one shelf!” Help! My roomate’s a commie!

The Dark Room on 2/6/2019 9:58:48 AM
Or maybe, just maybe, I just touch the walls until I find one. But this is ignoring the obvious fact that as a blind person, I don't really need to find a light switch. I just need to find a door ... which is done the same way as finding a light switch.

Interesting comments 4 on 2/6/2019 5:15:16 AM
For all the newbies that want to research the wonderful history of CYStia, here are the links to the first, second and third interesting comments thread. I hope that they will be joined by many more in the future.

The Dark Room on 2/6/2019 5:09:15 AM
I don't see how being in a dark room would be a problem. Just have a blind protagonist, problem solved! :)

Incel YOU on 2/4/2019 10:18:57 AM
This almost killed me, you bitch! Ok, not really. But it did teach me to behave in class. You see, our teacher was doing some oral testing, and told the rest to go look up some topic on the internet in the meantime. Boy, she's an optimistic one! Anyway, I usually am one of those good students, the teachers' pet and all that, but this time I thought "Hey, let's go check out CYS. I've got plenty of time, what could go wrong?" And then I found this post. I tried my best to stay serious, but soon I was grinning like crazy and only barely managing not to laugh like a god damned hyena. She must've seen me, I bet she did! Fortunately soon one of my classmates decided to say something stupid, so I could laugh. More so than everyone else, and much more than it deserved, since I wouldn't even smile at it in any other situation. Then, when the oral testing was over, she decided to choose me, of all people, to tell her what I learned on the internet. Fortunately someone else volunteered to answer just before she called me, so I just excused myself by saying he should be given a chanse first. But damn, I bet she knew that I didn't know jack shit! And then, when class was over, a classmate asked me what was so amusing. Fuck. Didn't tell him the truth, obviously. But still, awkward! So, today I learned once again why being on the internet while in school is bad. End, this is all your fault! But still, I give this page a 7/8. The characters were well written and very amusing; especially SightlessEvil, I can relate to that one very well for some reason. I'd word some things differently than her, but not by much. But still, only 7/8, because TheEnd didn't use the word lol at the end of his message. :P