I'm a blind teenager from Slovenia. Most of my time here is spent reading stories or writing stupid things on the forums, but I sometimes write short stories and poems as well. English isn't my first language, so any feedback is welcome! Up for a duel anytime.
Have a nice day, Mayana.
Here's the list of my 10 favorite stories, in no particular order:
BlueSabere: "I'm not doubting that so much as I am doubting that blind people are human."
- Homo Perfectus,
- Death Song,
- Ground Zero,
- Suzy's Strange Saga,
- Dead Man Walking (Zombie Survival),
- Through time,
- Dungeon Stompage,
- The Devil's Fire,
- The Secret of Daphne.
on 3/26/2017 4:42:42 AM
If you want to read it, I can't stop you, but you might have nightmares. The story has a 7/8 maturity rating (for movies, that would be R). Try Imagination
instead, I'm serious this time.
on 3/26/2017 4:29:27 AM
"I'm told I'm highly intelligent for my age ..." Sure, they tell that to everyone. Don't let it get into your head. But if you really are so mature, I recommend you read EndMaster's Love SICK,
I'm sure you'll love it!
Wait, no, don't actually read it! I was just joking, it's dark. :)
on 3/19/2017 3:37:02 PM
The stories that are considered good here are ones that are made well. The subject doesn't really matter (unless you write a WC story, of course). What matters is how much work you put into it. A story that was made in just a day won't be good, no matter the subject. Write about something you know and like to write about, the story will be the best that way.
on 3/19/2017 10:27:55 AM
Hello, new person! It's nice that you joined us and ... oh dear, what's this! Your profile looks awful, and I can't even see it! Let me put this simple for you, because you still don't seem to understand.
WC stories are banned here,
you can see why here.
Also, any story that doesn't meet the Minimum Site Standards
will get deleted. Figure this English thing out or leave.
Draw My Attention (Age of Apples)
on 3/18/2017 2:56:40 AM
Recommending a story for unpublishing: The Black Hand
Reason: The storygame has "dead" pages- pages with no links or way to proceed.
Draw My Attention (Age of Apples)
on 3/17/2017 3:46:04 PM
Recommending comments for deletion on A tale of love and hate..
- I got the path where Helen and Ferdinand got married
- whatta hay whatta hay its cool
- Please leave your comments and criticism, good or bad. It will help me improve my next stories. Thank you. :-)
Reason: Short comments that don’t address the story content directly or clearly. I am not sure about the last one, so you can decide if it can stay.
on 3/16/2017 10:10:28 AM
This is all nice and well, except one little problem: What you've given us amounts to nothing at all. If you have no clew what to write about, then join the writing prompts we have here, or search for some on the internet. Writing a few sentences in which we learn nothing at all is the same as writing nothing, in my opinion.
on 3/15/2017 2:01:33 PM
This isn't a story. This isn't even an idea yet. This is ... I don't know what it is, but whatever it might be, it isn't good.
Writing a story isn't a competition in which the one that types faster wins. It isn't just combining words in a way that you think makes sense, then asking others to do everything else for you.
First, learn how to write. Grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, vocabulary, spelling. They aren't monsters that want to eat you in your sleep, they are necessary for being a good writer. You can't run before you learn to walk. After that, read other stories on this site. See what they have that yours doesn't. Hint: everything.
on 3/8/2017 3:49:01 PM
Hello there, member number 40040, welcome to the site! To learn the standards on this site, read the featured stories. I hope they will help you with getting ideas for your story, too! Most importantly, have fun! Oh, and ignore the number, it's not accurate anyway. :)
I can't seem to find any
on 2/27/2017 2:10:32 PM