Mattias the One Knight

Player Rating0/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on ratings since 10/21/2005
played 15,909 times (finished 524)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level6/8

"i'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

Disclaimer: I was about 12 years old when I wrote this. - 3J

Play as Mattias, a young boy destined to do great things.  Become King, befriend a samurai, get the Destiny sword, gather knights, make a friend in the form of a horse.  If that wasn't enouph you also will  fulfill a prophecy, meet a water nymph and greet a magician.  All here in Mattias, THE one KNIGHT!

UPDATES, PLEASE TAKE A LOOK

V1. Completed, Many spelling errors.  Please Forgive
V2. Eased it up a little bit, changed two restrictions.
V3. Changed Description, fixed a few spelling errors.
V4. Fixed first of Mining village bugs. (Added link to steps)
V5. Fixed the rest of the Mining village Bugs. (Took the price from 7000 down to 1400 and fixed some bad links) and Added some clues and another way to get the Destiny Sword.  Thanx March I cant wait to be on the front page.
V6. Added tons of pictires fixed some spelling errors and slightly edited the description.
V7. A couple more spelling errors fixed, I think from Tidus3?

Player Comments

The typos and constant fourth wall breaking narration makes this hard to read. The listing of information seems kind of lazy; you could have placed some well written dialogue instead. That would give us the same information without jarring us out of the story.

There are many characters but there's hardly any character development, if any, for most of them. This is, again, mostly due to a distinct lack of dialogue. Since there are so many characters in this story lack of development just leaves them bland and unmemorable.

I can't say I particularly liked the plot. Overthrowing a tyrant as the chosen one is pretty cliche but can still work out well. Some points of the story made me laugh but my favorite were: "theyll give you a log if your the chosen one" and "Its for this reason that she was locked up in a tower ever so high, 65 feet to be exact". The first one speaks for itself but as for the second...65 feet is not high for a tower.

I expect much of the combat choices depended on our stats and could actually have involved horribly complex mechanisms for all I know. What I do know however is that "Slash and chop" hardly makes a difference to me when the other option is "Slash and slash". Even worse it's a life or death decision.

SPOILER ALERT-(I appreciate Arthurian legends as much as the next guy but it just felt tacked on. Uther does have plenty of achievements under his belt as a character of his own. That Mattias becomes king by killing the former despot is pretty far-fetched.)

I do want to end on a positive note though and I will...try anyway. I kind of liked the RPG aspect of this; walking into someone's house to take things is certainly nostalgic. It's also clear, particularly with quite a few updates, that some effort has been put into this.
-- Smith on 3/23/2013 11:50:31 PM with a score of 9525
WHERE IS THE SAMURAI
-- dragon396 on 7/12/2016 3:50:27 AM with a score of -14760
this reminds me of a generic fantasy rpg I once tried
-- crusader on 5/28/2016 12:47:18 PM with a score of 2290
Spelling mistakes...other than that good story
-- Jason on 5/5/2016 5:47:26 PM with a score of 3520
Eh, its okay I guess
-- Andreas on 3/15/2016 9:18:26 PM with a score of 9955
I loved it :D
-- Wigglewigglewiggle on 2/11/2016 8:00:49 PM with a score of 9425
It was kinda alright. But there were lots of wrong grammar.
-- Penworth on 6/5/2015 11:27:29 AM with a score of 300
I enjoyed the story and game mechanics, but the grammar and spelling were pretty bad. Also, I got the second best ending because I didn't have the destiny sword… but there was never a mention of the sword before. That was a huge disappointment, because I'd succeeded in everything up to that point and then the game was impossible to win. Try not to do that in your future games. Having something sneak up and deny the player victory at the last second is just not nice and you hurt my feelings. - 5/8
-- pudgymuffins on 4/24/2015 4:37:00 AM with a score of 11410
Pretty good.
-- WarriorCatsRPStories on 4/19/2015 8:59:32 PM with a score of 1915
Aw, I could tell I was close to the end…I died at the pub…;(
-- DeathWhisperer on 10/20/2014 9:18:23 PM with a score of -6230
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