Missing in Action
, #5 for
played 1,232 times (finished 106)
"trek through the forest"
"Not going to lose any sleep"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Based Off A True Story
A story about friendship and survival.
' first storygame.
Would be better without cuss words.
-- Zach on 3/18/2018 4:50:53 PM with a score of 0
It was good, not the best but very good.
on 3/13/2018 2:53:18 PM with a score of 0
It's a good story but there's no real danger in the climax but the tension is there though. 6/8
on 12/29/2017 12:10:23 AM with a score of 0
your work was really good just add some thing more fun:)
on 4/12/2017 4:06:03 PM with a score of 0
it was a little boring ,but fun:)
on 4/12/2017 4:03:38 PM with a score of 0
-- FourElemental on 11/30/2016 11:25:04 PM with a score of 0
Really well written.
on 5/7/2016 1:24:23 AM with a score of 0
my complaint is that it is too short. Would have liked to see more of a story, and get to know the friends better. I also dont understand why they sat for a few days singing instead of trying to get back out of the caves. Earlier it said they did this all the time. Certainly not a bad story, just not long enough. But entertaining while it lasted
on 5/16/2015 1:45:55 PM with a score of 0
eh but the ending was sorta cruel with the spiders. saying you are a stick. but otherwise enough words to keep interest
on 10/7/2014 6:06:09 PM with a score of 0
I was really bored until the ending that you were rescued in. that was sooooooo sweet!
-- goalie great on 4/23/2014 10:40:14 PM with a score of 0
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