Player Comments on Surviving the forest

Very nice but too short I wish it was longer because I enjoyed it very much

The story is too short for the idea you came up with (even though it's not even original). Your sentences run on since you barely know what a comma is (although there is a few in there) and your spelling is not 100%. Remember, there is no need to rush a story! Taking your time and getting someone to go over it for mistakes is the best way to do it. :)

No effort.

Very short and boring. Unrealistic, too. It's just your average do-or-die "story".

It was fun

Really good

It was OK.

It was like: Good...DON'T SAVE ME YET, PLEASE!

It's pretty good, but short. Some mistakes.
But all in all, pretty good for a first story.

I am going to agree with Mizals summary.

I literally won in less than 2 minutes. No joke. Put more effort into your story next time; this was bare bones and way too easy/short.

Usually I'm a fan of wilderness survival stuff but this...uh, reasonably okay effort for what's probably a ten year old, I guess?

No time/energy to go into depth here, but next time you need to proofread, do some research on what you're writing about, learn a bit of scripting so you can keep track of what the player has or what they've done instead of just assuming, and just as a request, please drop the little authorial asides and railroading.

This was short but it had enough imagination and effort put into it that with some practice and polish, I could see your next project being more memorable.

it's a'ight

At first, I was confused about why I couldn't survive on the beach, but then I realized this game was about "Surviving in the FOREST". I get in now. I understand. Good game. 6/8

CresentRose / Melody, I'm an admin. I can tell you're the same person. You are not going to be able to fix your rating with alts, and the fact that you're trying is damaging your reputation. xD Quit.

It was interesting i liked it good job CresentRose204

I fell off a cliff for some reason.

To be quite honest, it wasn't bad for a first try.
While not very lengthy, it was more of a meh than a BURN IT WITH FIRE like some of the other Storygames that have appeared recently...
I didn't see many grammar mistakes, and it wasn't a do or die all the time.
Just please...
Don't give yourself multiple votes >.>

" xD She left herself a 3, two 5s, and a 4. "

Well, that's beautiful.
But seriously...
Why do that?
Why not just make a good game with time and effort?
Seriously.
Giving yourself votes doesn't do anything.
It actually makes it worse because other people vote lower...
>.>
1/8 for alting and for making a horrible story.

The game was ok it was really short, but I liked how you made it not too hard, but not too easy it was good overall!

The quiz was ok, but there were a few grammar mistakes, good job for your first quiz!:)