Steve24833, The Journeyman Scrivener

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5/30/2017 9:06 AM

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21 wins / 19 losses


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Hi, I'm Steve. Feel free to check out my games listed down below. Probably best to avoid my recent posts seeing as they're almost certainly me yelling at and arguing with children on the internet. I also write a little series called Council of Nine about a fictionalized version of the site in a fantasy setting, and try to occasionally toss something to the overworked Will11 for the Weekly Review, the site's newspaper.

Anyhow, read my shit, or yell at me, or search through my points to see what I've done if you're weird and value that as a use of your time.



"STEVE is the cause of my anger." The Final Brennon

"Steve is a loudmouthed piece of dogshit but we should pity him, life must not be easy for an inbred ginger freak who has to lash out on an internet forum whenever the constant wanking while crying with repressed Catholic guilt because be can't decide whether he likes dicks or tits (because his sister has both) all just becomes too much. His writing is shittier than anyone will admit and I hate him more than anyone in this site." Mizal.

"He's a half-fag degenerate who hates America." Endmaster

"People who quote themselves are retards." Steve24833

"Steve is degenerate filth and an embarrassment to the human race." Axiom

"Steve is undialectical trash and belongs in a gulag." Malkalack

"Steve has made me question every belief I have held up until now about the inherent goodness of people." Will11.

"Steve, you have a puny brain and the attention span of a retarded child." JJJ-thebanisher

"I just think about homosexuals." Sicarius

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Won 2016 Contest for new School-based Storygames Having 3 Storygame(s) Featured Rated 71.4% of all Stories Given by EndMaster on 02/09/2016 - For continual output of quality stories. Given by JJJ-thebanisher on 03/05/2017 - Because you work hard and contribute a lot and deserve nice things Given by Will11 on 01/15/2017 - For your countless fantastic stories


Featured Story Achilles

Take control of General Achilles, a human General trying to lead the human fleet to prosperity through politics and military means, while dealing with keeping humanity and it's allies together, dealing with a barbaric race of raiders and a powerful alien alliance. Will humanity crush it's enemies under it's boots? Will you form a peaceful coalition between all species? Or will you become humanity's downfall?

This is my first game, which I made with the help of Steve24833. I really hope you enjoy it. Please comment on any bugs, mistakes or other screw-ups I made. 

Hey, the sequel's here, Achilles II: The Chykri. Enjoy it!

Achilles II: The Chykri

Play as Achilles, the leader of the new Coalition of humans, aliens and machines, to combat a new threat: The Chykri. Attempt to keep the Coalition together and fight not only to win, but to survive.

This is a sequel to our previous game, Achilles. We hope you enjoy it. Please rate and comment. Unless you don't like it, in which case just grumble to yourself about how this one isn't as good as the first. Thanks.

EDIT: Had to do some light work. Changed it so surrendering to Chykri grants alternative final chapter instead of sending back to start, checked grammar, changed a few more mistakes. Please message me or Steve if you find any bugs.

Among the Trees

Take control of Jacob, a young settler in New England in the late 17th Century. A tale of romance, horror and strange supernatural creatures awaits you in the odd and interesting woods that surround your home.

Well, this is just a short little romance-horror thing I made in three days to distract me from other projects. I hope you enjoy!


Take control of Samuel, a young man thrust into a world of bloodthirsty creatures of the night, howling beasts cursed by the moon, horrifying demons and worse.

This is our entry for Bucky's 2016 Halloween Contest. Enjoy!


Take control of a teenager moving to Dawnwood, a boring town deep in the south in the middle of nowhere. Still, the town holds many deep and dark secrets, many of which you will uncover soon...

Featured Story Fear the Psyker

Take control of Karth, a child with incredible powers born into a simple tribe on a feral world, as your life is torn apart by the arrival of the forces of Chaos. Fall into line as an obedient-slave soldier and fulfil your role as a trained killer, rise up against beings of pure hate and malice to try gain your freedom, or simply try to survive in a galaxy of horrors.

Well, I tried to write a Fanfiction based on Warhammer 40'000. If you're not familar with the series, don't worry, you don't need to be to play this. I hope you enjoy!


Take control of a young, aggressive Orc named Mazkil, of the Tribe the Red Blades, in his attempt to make his way in the world. Become an honored Chieftain of your tribe or become a feared Soldier for the Kingdom of Man.

Please comment and rate, tell me if you find any bugs. Enjoy!

Featured Story Prometheus Academy

Take control of Mia, a student at Prometheus Academy, a school designed for creating super-soldiers, trained killers, unstoppable super-humans, skilled secret agents and above all, super-villains, and get revenge against the Crimson Cape, a super who's taken everything from you. 

This is the winner of the 2016 School-based Contest, so yay! Thanks to all who voted. I hope you all enjoy it.


There is a prophecy that one day, the barrier between reality and that which lies beyond will weaken. That day the great Mol'Chu will come forth, for it has its infinite eyes set upon this realm. It will drive all creatures to the realms of insanity and torment. However, the prophecy also tells of a great hero who will rise up, and the fate of the world will lie in his hands.

You are not that hero. You are a Ratling, your blood as weak as can be, your lineage one of thieves and cowards. Still, with your path there's a chance for betterment. You might be able to lift yourself up and find yourself some power in this world. Power you will wield. 

Thanks to WouldntItBeNice for beta-reading this, she was a great help. This is my longest storygame so far and I've decided to delve into some fantasy again. Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy!

The Only Lights in the Darkness are Flames

Take control of four members of SWAT in Tijuana raid a large, ancient mansion inhabited by the Espada de Dios, a Satanist cult that's kidnapped several people. Switch between these members as they stumble upon a horrific scene of horror, gore and perhaps something much worse...

This is my second horror story, a short little game I made just to help with Writers' Block on my larger games. Thanks to MasonJarGuzzi for proofreading. Enjoy!

Featured Story The Path of Death

Take control of Dagden, a small Orc child taken from his family and taken prisoner in Reaper Castle under the control of the Grand Necromancer, before making friends with his daughter Blaise and choosing how to make your mark in the world.

This is my spin-off to Mazkil, except better, longer and with more things you like and less things you don't like, whatever they may be. Somehow, I've appealed to everyone! I'd like to thank the wonderful Mizal for beta-reading and helping me sort through this storygame and make it readable, she was a fantastic help. Please rate, comment and tell me if you find any bugs. Thanks, and enjoy!

Recent Posts

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 8:39:27 AM

Good to know you support Imperialism, then.

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 8:35:23 AM

I gave them a chance. The Socialist Monthly Review makes grandiose claims that Western accounts are wrong without any citations or evidence for this and then changes the subject to focus on the economic benefits of these actions without going back to the death count. "ThisIsCommunism" uses Mao's government claiming to be non-violent as evidence they're not while ignoring all the evidence that critics were killed and imprisoned, and also blames many violent actions by the Communists as being black flag works by Capitalists without a shred of evidence. It says the first-hand accounts of violence are all just distorted people writing lies, again without evidence.

I don't trust the Black Book of Communism. It's claims that Mao killed over 100 million people are biased, and I agree with his critics that it's closer to the 60-70 million range.

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 6:08:08 AM

You're an idiot.

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 6:07:50 AM


Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 6:03:27 AM

Alright, let's go through this. Interesting though you note that the revolution was to stop China becomes what it is today, without realizing it seems that means Zedong failed.

1. Massive portal, clarify what you're citing.

2. Nothing to do with population killed.

3. Nothing to do with population killed.

4. You've cited a book link, that's not evidence. What evidence does the book use? Plus, I can't read it, to be honest."To read too many books is harmful".

5. You've cited a book link, that's not evidence. What evidence does the book use?

6. The United Nations' sources don't agree with what you're saying.

7. You've cited a book link, that's not evidence. What evidence does the book use?

8. Nothing in there to support your claims.

9. What evidence does the book use?

10. Not sure what your point is here, as it agrees with me.

11. Already cited, already shown as heavily biased due to the fact it's a Communist paper.

12. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

13. A literal Communist paper so heavily biased, and has no evidence.

14. What evidence does the book have?

15. What evidence does the book have?

16. Broken link, which instantly proves to me you're not looking at the evidence.

17. Agrees with me.

18. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

19. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

20. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

21. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

22. Nothing to do with what we're talking about.

23. Nothing.

24. Nada.

25. Zip.

26. Fuck off, you haven't read these links if you haven't seen they're irrelevant.

27. Irrelevant again.

28. This shows HDI has continuously risen and there's no visible increase in that rate caused by Mao.

So really, it's clear that you're the one not looking at the evidence, such as the fact that half your sources show the collapse of your ideology in China, which let's be honest, we already knew since you cower at half my points and don't seem to understand a word you're saying.

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 5:39:22 AM

Don't be retarded Coins. For America to help it's allies is Imperialism, for China to do it is just the UPRISING OF THE PEOPLE!

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 5:37:54 AM

Yes, commit violence to be brave! Occupy others! GLORY!

Steve's Progressive! on 5/30/2017 5:36:30 AM

Yeah, but people act far more shocked than if I just said I'm pro-Choice, and many were also pro-choice if I recall.

Memorial Day on 5/30/2017 5:35:22 AM

The quote is meaningless anyhow. It's a Communist saying their opposition will be lose, which of course they'd say that. My counter-evidence would be looking at how Communist China has done vs America.

Memorial Day on 5/29/2017 8:25:41 PM

30 million and 8 million would be biased, yeah. It's 60-70 million.