Steve24833, The Expert Scrivener

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8/17/2018 3:23 PM

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22 wins / 19 losses


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Hi, I'm Steve, pleasure to meet you. I'm an admittedly brash, narcissistic Irish college student who has wandered onto the internet to have some craic and write something. Feel free to check out my games listed down below, I hope you enjoy them.

Anyhow, read my work, or yell at me, or search through my points to see what I've done if you're weird and value that as a use of your time.



"STEVE is the cause of my anger." The Final Brennon

"Steve is a loudmouthed piece of dogshit but we should pity him, life must not be easy for an inbred ginger freak who has to lash out on an internet forum whenever the constant wanking while crying with repressed Catholic guilt because be can't decide whether he likes dicks or tits (because his sister has both) all just becomes too much. His writing is shittier than anyone will admit and I hate him more than anyone in this site." Mizal.

"He's a half-fag degenerate who hates America." Endmaster

"People who quote themselves are retards." Steve24833

"Steve is degenerate filth and an embarrassment to the human race." Axiom

"Steve is undialectical trash and belongs in a gulag." Malkalack

"Steve has made me question every belief I have held up until now about the inherent goodness of people." Will11

"Steve, you have a puny brain and the attention span of a retarded child." JJJ-thebanisher

"Steve is the site's Down Syndrome baby that we all wish we had aborted long ago, but it's too late now, though he is mildly endearing in a drooling retard sort of way." BerkaZerka

"Here you are, throwing insults like a toddler with a dictionary." RoyalGhost_007

"You might be (the greatest writer of all motherfucking time)." Mayana

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Won 2016 Contest for new School-based Storygames Having 5 Storygame(s) Featured Rated 67.9% of all Stories Given by EndMaster on 02/09/2016 - For continual output of quality stories. Given by JJJ-thebanisher on 03/05/2017 - Because you work hard and contribute a lot and deserve nice things Given by Will11 on 01/15/2017 - For your countless fantastic stories


Featured Story Achilles

Take control of General Achilles, a human General trying to lead the human fleet to prosperity through politics and military means, while dealing with keeping humanity and it's allies together, dealing with a barbaric race of raiders and a powerful alien alliance. Will humanity crush it's enemies under it's boots? Will you form a peaceful coalition between all species? Or will you become humanity's downfall?

This is my first game, which I made with the help of Steve24833. I really hope you enjoy it. Please comment on any bugs, mistakes or other screw-ups I made. 

Hey, the sequel's here, Achilles II: The Chykri. Enjoy it!

Achilles II: The Chykri

Play as Achilles, the leader of the new Coalition of humans, aliens and machines, to combat a new threat: The Chykri. Attempt to keep the Coalition together and fight not only to win, but to survive.

This is a sequel to our previous game, Achilles. We hope you enjoy it. Please rate and comment. Unless you don't like it, in which case just grumble to yourself about how this one isn't as good as the first. Thanks.

EDIT: Had to do some light work. Changed it so surrendering to Chykri grants alternative final chapter instead of sending back to start, checked grammar, changed a few more mistakes. Please message me or Steve if you find any bugs.

Among the Trees

Take control of Jacob, a young settler in New England in the late 17th Century. A tale of romance, horror and strange supernatural creatures awaits you in the odd and interesting woods that surround your home.

Well, this is just a short little romance-horror thing I made in three days to distract me from other projects. I hope you enjoy!

Featured Story Blooded

Take control of Samuel, a young man thrust into a world of bloodthirsty creatures of the night, howling beasts cursed by the moon, horrifying demons and worse.

This is our entry for Bucky's 2016 Halloween Contest. Enjoy!


Take control of a teenager moving to Dawnwood, a boring town deep in the south in the middle of nowhere. Still, the town holds many deep and dark secrets, many of which you will uncover soon...

Featured Story Fear the Psyker

Take control of Karth, a child with incredible powers born into a simple tribe on a feral world, as your life is torn apart by the arrival of the forces of Chaos. Fall into line as an obedient-slave soldier and fulfil your role as a trained killer, rise up against beings of pure hate and malice to try gain your freedom, or simply try to survive in a galaxy of horrors.

Well, I tried to write a Fanfiction based on Warhammer 40'000. If you're not familar with the series, don't worry, you don't need to be to play this. I hope you enjoy!


Take control of a young, aggressive Orc named Mazkil, of the Tribe the Red Blades, in his attempt to make his way in the world. Become an honored Chieftain of your tribe or become a feared Soldier for the Kingdom of Man.

Please comment and rate, tell me if you find any bugs. Enjoy!

Featured Story Prometheus Academy

Take control of Mia, a student at Prometheus Academy, a school designed for creating super-soldiers, trained killers, unstoppable super-humans, skilled secret agents and above all, super-villains, and get revenge against the Crimson Cape, a super who's taken everything from you. 

This is the winner of the 2016 School-based Contest, so yay! Thanks to all who voted. I hope you all enjoy it.


There is a prophecy that one day, the barrier between reality and that which lies beyond will weaken. That day the great Mol'Chu will come forth, for it has its infinite eyes set upon this realm. It will drive all creatures to the realms of insanity and torment. However, the prophecy also tells of a great hero who will rise up, and the fate of the world will lie in his hands.

You are not that hero. You are a Ratling, your blood as weak as can be, your lineage one of thieves and cowards. Still, with your path there's a chance for betterment. You might be able to lift yourself up and find yourself some power in this world. Power you will wield. 

Thanks to WouldntItBeNice for beta-reading this, they were a great help. This is my longest storygame so far and I've decided to delve into some fantasy again. Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy!

Featured Story Saoirse

It is 1914. With fears of a war with Germany finally coming to pass, the British Empire has been plunged into war. While the Great War rages on, there is a resurgence of the Irish Independence movement, as the Irish people rise up to take advantage of the times to claim their freedom. You'll be taking the role Michael McCarthy, a young man in such a troubled and turmoil-filled time. Take part in the 1916 Rising, the War of Independence and the Treaty War as brother is pitted against brother, friend against friend and father against son, as a country at war with itself is torn apart.

Well, seeing as it's been 102 years since the 1916 Easter Rising, I'd say an Edutainment game is appropriate to tell the story of the Irish struggle for independence. For the purposes of narrative and to allow choice, your character is a fictional one and at certain points will replace roles done by other men in real life to facilitate the narrative and to allow for choice and interaction, so that you'll be able to see and play a role in key events throughout the period. Enjoy!

The Nightmare Realm

Take control of James, a young boy who has suffered from horrific nightmares all his life that seem to be far more real than anyone else thinks, their effects seeping into the real world as your entire life becomes a nightmare. Try to stay sane throughout your miserable existence, while trying to end this curse and find some way to stop this hell.

Well, it's Halloween, and I haven't written anything in a while, so before your old Irish feen goes out and about on sesh, I thought I'd publish this. Enjoy!

The Only Lights in the Darkness are Flames

Take control of four members of SWAT in Tijuana raid a large, ancient mansion inhabited by the Espada de Dios, a Satanist cult that's kidnapped several people. Switch between these members as they stumble upon a horrific scene of horror, gore and perhaps something much worse...

This is my second horror story, a short little game I made just to help with Writers' Block on my larger games. Thanks to MasonJarGuzzi for proofreading. Enjoy!

Featured Story The Path of Death

Take control of Dagden, a small Orc child taken from his family and taken prisoner in Reaper Castle under the control of the Grand Necromancer, before making friends with his daughter Blaise and choosing how to make your mark in the world.

This is my spin-off to Mazkil, except better, longer and with more things you like and less things you don't like, whatever they may be. Somehow, I've appealed to everyone! I'd like to thank the OKish Mizal for beta-reading and helping me sort through this storygame and make it readable, she was a fantastic help. Please rate, comment and tell me if you find any bugs. Thanks, and enjoy!


Take control of Karth, a young, powerful Psyker who has managed to lead a slave army to take over a massive battleship, and now has the whole galaxy at the tip of his fingers. Embrace the gifts of the Dark Gods and all the power and corruption it brings, sell your services to the highest bidder, take to the stars as a feared raider and pirate or try to find a peaceful existence among the dark and cruel stars. As the anarchic and terrifying Kaam the Prophet, loyal servant of Malice, rises up in the galaxy with a bloodlust for psykers and servants of the Warp, attempt to take down the champion of a destructive God that seeks to tear the galaxy apart.

This is a sequel to Fear the Psyker. It's my longest story yet and it has a lot of variables, so if, or more accurately, when you encounter any bugs, please do send them on, and I'll try my best to fix them. Also, the Score variable doesn't have anything to do with success, it's just a few variables to tell me what various choices commentators made and what endings they got.

Thanks to Seto and DiniTheWizard for beta-reading this! Anyhow, enjoy!

Synthetic Muscles of an Artificial Heart

In the distant future, mankind has fallen into decadence and corruption, its massive empire spanning hundreds of worlds. With humanity having long since lost any sense of meaning, the Terran Republic has stagnated into near-collapse. To live is simply to survive, and in order to insure its own survival, the Republic has created an endless army of vat-born synthetic soldiers to push forward and conquer the galaxy.

Take control of Echo-Dawn-1898206, or "Wilde", one of these young Synthetic humans, designed, bred and trained to fight and wage war for the Republic. Face off again psychopathic bugs, powerful alien killing machines and far, far worse, and try to find some meaning in the cold, dark universe. 

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Opinions on freeze peach on 8/15/2018 11:00:04 AM

The criteria Coins put down for the limiting of free speech was based off, as Coins said, "directly hurting or defaming other people", so yeah, the harassment of a multimillionaire coal executive does fall under that. The reason I went with a coal executive is because it's not something Coins would probably agree with putting in this same category, showing the criteria he's using don't work.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/15/2018 9:39:09 AM

That's not really the point I'm trying to make. I'm focusing how Coins clearly thinks that Alex Jones negatively impacting people should be restricted, but the criteria he puts out just wouldn't stand given I'm sure he'd be fine with negatively impacting someone of more questionable character, like a Liberal Comedian insulting and ridiculing a coal executive to the point of negatively impacting them.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/14/2018 9:12:34 AM

So if I get more popular, I'm going to get my speech restricted more and more? Does that seem like a fair system to you?

Never the less, if I was popular, then. 

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/13/2018 7:37:44 AM

So who can I say it about? Coal executives with little media attention? Saying shit about them would lead to them being actually impacted. What about a cop in a shooting? If I say he's secretly a racist scumbag, that'll effect him.

Even then, seems to me most of the bullshit Jones throws out is at people with lots of attention anyway, so besides the Hook example he's not doing too much, and he hasn't even talked about them in ages, so he's not getting kicked off just for that.

EPIC Contest - The Contest to Rule Them All on 8/10/2018 8:55:40 PM

No you can't. Definitely not.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/10/2018 2:45:16 PM

I'm right about near everything, it's cool.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/10/2018 1:40:51 PM

So it's no longer even about whether it's "blatantly false", but instead now about whether saying things impact others negatively? What if I say that Trump's basically Hitler? That leads to him getting more harassment, and negatively impacts him.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/10/2018 12:13:26 PM

Not what I asked. Obviously, all ideas don't deserve the same merit or attention. But, should we try to limit censorship of ideas wherever we can, or do you think some ideas should be censored, even if by private entities?

Apologies, I assumed it was rhetorical. Is Sandy Hook worth debating? Well yes, it's worth debating and then debunking, definitely. All negative ideas are worth the time to debate and debunk. If we refuse to debate with ideas like Sandy Hook being faked, then how exactly do we expect people who think that to learn?

Thoughts on gun control on 8/10/2018 12:10:02 PM

Well you said you agreed with me, so... yeah. Nevermind, a misunderstanding, I guess.

But no, you talked about Prohibition, which was about guns, not alcohol. Prohibition doesn't work because alcohol's an addictive substance. There was prohibition in Australia, for instance, and that had the same results as in America. Unless you meant because of the second amendment, which doesn't really make sense, as we can change amendments. We got rid of the 18th Amendment, we can get rid of the 2nd.

Opinions on freeze peach on 8/10/2018 12:05:27 PM

What is your stance on free speech, though? Not the legal concept as it exists in the US, but the whole concept. Is it a good idea that we should strive for? Either you're against it as a concept and you don't think we should do as little as we can to minimize restrictions on debate and discourse and speech, in which case I think you're an idiot with an ideology far worse than Jones, or than yes, those ideas shouldn't be censored.