Steve24833, The Apprentice Scrivener

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4/25/2017 6:15 PM

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18 wins / 17 losses


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Hi, I'm Steve. Feel free to check out my games listed down below. Probably best to avoid my recent posts seeing as they're almost certainly me yelling at and arguing with children on the internet. I also write a little series called Council of Nine about a fictionalized version of the site in a fantasy setting, and try to occasionally toss something to the overworked Will11 for the Weekly Review, the site's newspaper.

Anyhow, read my shit, or yell at me, or search through my points to see what I've done if you're weird and value that as a use of your time.



"STEVE is the cause of my anger." The Final Brennon

"Steve is a loudmouthed piece of dogshit but we should pity him, life must not be easy for an inbred ginger freak who has to lash out on an internet forum whenever the constant wanking while crying with repressed Catholic guilt because be can't decide whether he likes dicks or tits (because his sister has both) all just becomes too much. His writing is shittier than anyone will admit and I hate him more than anyone in this site." Mizal.

"He's a half-fag degenerate who hates America." Endmaster

"People who quote themselves are retards." Steve24833

"Steve is degenerate filth and an embarrassment to the human race." Axiom

"Steve is undialectical trash and belongs in a gulag." Malkalack

"Steve has made me question every belief I have held up until now about the inherent goodness of people." Will11.

"Steve, you have a puny brain and the attention span of a retarded child." JJJ-thebanisher

"I just think about homosexuals." Danaos

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Won 2016 Contest for new School-based Storygames Having 3 Storygame(s) Featured Given by EndMaster on 02/09/2016 - For continual output of quality stories. Given by JJJ-thebanisher on 03/05/2017 - Because you work hard and contribute a lot and deserve nice things Given by Will11 on 01/15/2017 - For your countless fantastic stories


Featured Story Achilles

Take control of General Achilles, a human General trying to lead the human fleet to prosperity through politics and military means, while dealing with keeping humanity and it's allies together, dealing with a barbaric race of raiders and a powerful alien alliance. Will humanity crush it's enemies under it's boots? Will you form a peaceful coalition between all species? Or will you become humanity's downfall?

This is my first game, which I made with the help of Steve24833. I really hope you enjoy it. Please comment on any bugs, mistakes or other screw-ups I made. 

Hey, the sequel's here, Achilles II: The Chykri. Enjoy it!

Achilles II: The Chykri

Play as Achilles, the leader of the new Coalition of humans, aliens and machines, to combat a new threat: The Chykri. Attempt to keep the Coalition together and fight not only to win, but to survive.

This is a sequel to our previous game, Achilles. We hope you enjoy it. Please rate and comment. Unless you don't like it, in which case just grumble to yourself about how this one isn't as good as the first. Thanks.

EDIT: Had to do some light work. Changed it so surrendering to Chykri grants alternative final chapter instead of sending back to start, checked grammar, changed a few more mistakes. Please message me or Steve if you find any bugs.

Among the Trees

Take control of Jacob, a young settler in New England in the late 17th Century. A tale of romance, horror and strange supernatural creatures awaits you in the odd and interesting woods that surround your home.

Well, this is just a short little romance-horror thing I made in three days to distract me from other projects. I hope you enjoy!


Take control of Samuel, a young man thrust into a world of bloodthirsty creatures of the night, howling beasts cursed by the moon, horrifying demons and worse.

This is our entry for Bucky's 2016 Halloween Contest. Enjoy!


Take control of a teenager moving to Dawnwood, a boring town deep in the south in the middle of nowhere. Still, the town holds many deep and dark secrets, many of which you will uncover soon...

Featured Story Fear the Psyker

Take control of Karth, a child with incredible powers born into a simple tribe on a feral world, as your life is torn apart by the arrival of the forces of Chaos. Fall into line as an obedient-slave soldier and fulfil your role as a trained killer, rise up against beings of pure hate and malice to try gain your freedom, or simply try to survive in a galaxy of horrors.

Well, I tried to write a Fanfiction based on Warhammer 40'000. If you're not familar with the series, don't worry, you don't need to be to play this. I hope you enjoy!


Take control of a young, aggressive Orc named Mazkil, of the Tribe the Red Blades, in his attempt to make his way in the world. Become an honored Chieftain of your tribe or become a feared Soldier for the Kingdom of Man.

Please comment and rate, tell me if you find any bugs. Enjoy!

Featured Story Prometheus Academy

Take control of Mia, a student at Prometheus Academy, a school designed for creating super-soldiers, trained killers, unstoppable super-humans, skilled secret agents and above all, super-villains, and get revenge against the Crimson Cape, a super who's taken everything from you. 

This is the winner of the 2016 School-based Contest, so yay! Thanks to all who voted. I hope you all enjoy it.


There is a prophecy that one day, the barrier between reality and that which lies beyond will weaken. That day the great Mol'Chu will come forth, for it has its infinite eyes set upon this realm. It will drive all creatures to the realms of insanity and torment. However, the prophecy also tells of a great hero who will rise up, and the fate of the world will lie in his hands.

You are not that hero. You are a Ratling, your blood as weak as can be, your lineage one of thieves and cowards. Still, with your path there's a chance for betterment. You might be able to lift yourself up and find yourself some power in this world. Power you will wield. 

Thanks to WouldntItBeNice for beta-reading this, she was a great help. This is my longest storygame so far and I've decided to delve into some fantasy again. Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy!

The Only Lights in the Darkness are Flames

Take control of four members of SWAT in Tijuana raid a large, ancient mansion inhabited by the Espada de Dios, a Satanist cult that's kidnapped several people. Switch between these members as they stumble upon a horrific scene of horror, gore and perhaps something much worse...

This is my second horror story, a short little game I made just to help with Writers' Block on my larger games. Thanks to MasonJarGuzzi for proofreading. Enjoy!

Featured Story The Path of Death

Take control of Dagden, a small Orc child taken from his family and taken prisoner in Reaper Castle under the control of the Grand Necromancer, before making friends with his daughter Blaise and choosing how to make your mark in the world.

This is my spin-off to Mazkil, except better, longer and with more things you like and less things you don't like, whatever they may be. Somehow, I've appealed to everyone! I'd like to thank the wonderful Mizal for beta-reading and helping me sort through this storygame and make it readable, she was a fantastic help. Please rate, comment and tell me if you find any bugs. Thanks, and enjoy!

Recent Posts

Selfie thread on 4/25/2017 3:25:41 AM

No evidence has been provided for your stated facts, thus I must disbelieve them, as someone unwilling to tell me their gender is untrustworthy.

Selfie thread on 4/24/2017 6:12:25 PM


Selfie thread on 4/24/2017 6:05:37 PM

Obviously I want you to post, I'm curious.

Selfie thread on 4/24/2017 5:33:35 PM

It's worth nothing, as many members have posted without actually showing us what they look like, I must make assumptions and use my great writing abilities to show you all.

Wibbons: Tranny in mid-puberty. It would explain her strange gender issues, she's clearly a child. Her general uncertainty would hint towards asexuality, but either pre or post transition homosexual tendencies also work.

Bradindvorak: Dude's probably sexy. He's Nordic if I recall correctly, hence he's probably tall, blond and has nice broad shoulders. Maybe nerdy glasses.

Sent: Seriously overweight, although no glasses or neckbeard to the surprise of most. Horrible stench that reeks from the strange liquids between his folds, his pasty skin dotted by the horrible scars of puberty; acne.

Mayana: Literally no one knows.

Will: Looks really normal, maybe even a bit good looking. He could easily convince anyone at the playground he's a nice dude.

Mizal: Eh... I'll leave it to all your imagination.

Banner: Dude's paranoid, so I assume he doesn't get out. Incredibly pale, then. I assume that's not good for his skin, so covered in red acne that he constantly assumes are laser sights from those who want to kill him. 

Thara: Due to the personal obsession with End, I'm going to assume acne. Pretty overweight and hairy, but surprisingly good eyes so no specs.

End: Some sort of Albino beaner, I suppose.

Negative: Secretly two very young Asian boys having a laugh.

Until further notice, all of you should hold these mental images of these characters. Please take no notice of any denials other than photographic evidence. 

Oh, and Seto: Really ugly little girl. Pig tails, probably, I dunno. I presume they'll post soon and clear it up rather than be a little bitch.

Selfie thread on 4/24/2017 5:14:05 PM

Yeah, you can't even tell if it's a girl or boy. SETO'S ANSWERED NOTHING!

Selfie thread on 4/24/2017 5:13:02 PM

Don't believe it, hold up a card.

Writing Prompts Week #14 on 4/24/2017 5:12:30 PM

Haha, Mizal lost to PuddleBunni. Go fuck yourself, Mizal, the children are better than you.

Oh, and stop tagging me. When it occasionally works it's a bother.

I need anti-motivation. on 4/24/2017 11:29:30 AM

"Yeah, I know". Huh, you seem to be just a cunt. Your continuous failure to write anything should suit for your anti-motivation, you're welcome.

Steve demands attention! on 4/23/2017 8:24:14 AM

That's not a response, commie scum.

Steve demands attention! on 4/23/2017 7:37:35 AM

I'm not defending him though. All I've said so far was that he had faults but he was still a socialist leader.

Then don't support leaders you know nothing/very little about.

The idea of ethical capitalism is a myth. Even if you don't like imperialism and want 'government controls' (?) there will still be a bourgeois class that exploits a proletariat class. Private property will still be a concept. Basic human necessities like housing, education, and healthcare will require money. And the bourgeoisie will still be engaged in imperialism, as we see with Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan, Vietnam, and so on.

No it's quite frankly not. We can see it working in the Nordic countries quite well, and I'll say that seems like the best we're getting. And actually, education and healthcare are free there. They're many capitalist countries not engaging in Imperialism.

Therefore, of course, communism has never been achieved. Whereas socialism has been.

It seems strange how quick you are to say that the USSR, Maoist China and all the other shitstacks aren't Communist. You don't seem to understand what Communism is. Communism is not a type of society. It is an ideology. It might want the ideal Communist state, but so far, we've seen when you pursue Communism, you end up with a shitty country. If you want to talk about this 'ideal' Communism, that, quite frankly, is a myth and it's not going to happen. It's been tried to be achieved many times before and never worked.

Communism has never existed. Capitalism is the best we have had, when compared to previous societies like feudalism. However, due to class antagonisms, capitalism is absolutely not permanent. Class antagonisms cause a society to become unstable, and sooner or later, a proletarian revolution will occur, just as a revolution occurred in fedualist society giving us capitalism.

Countries have pursued Communism, they've pursued Capitalism, the Communism one doesn't work. If the pioneers you send aren't even making it, maybe give up on the journey. If you're going to say this system that had never once been successful and always seem to collapse is the more stable one to the one that most of the world holds, you're going to need evidence. Communism is not stable in any way, because people don't like being equal, they like to strive for more, to be greater. It's our natural instinct. With a capitalist society with mobility and welfare, they have that, and there's no one in such shitty circumstances that they all try fuck the country with Communism. Until you have evidence, it seems the Communist nations fall, the Capitalist ones survive.

I feel like you're trolling me, but you're way too dedicated. So I'm going to ask you to clarify what exactly you mean by all of this nonsense.

Are you trying to argue that Socialism and Communism are the same thing? You've said they're not, so I don't see how me pointing out how you use Socialist as the only label for a country failing to achieve your unachievable Communist utopia. You've already shown your misunderstanding of Marx and the fact that you're trying to defend an ideology you don't understand is childish at best.