Mystery / Puzzle
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 285 times (finished 59)
"march in the swamp"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
A classic murder mystery.
How in the world does this have the rating it has? Alright, let's review.
"A classic murder mystery."
Nope. This is far from a classic murder mystery, as a classic murder mystery has to at least qualify as half decent.
This was incredibly short, and I finished it in about thirty seconds. There were quite a lot of pages and links, but there was so little detail and about a sentence per page for most pages, there was just nothing to really read honestly.
When you hint for the player to use the human potion, that's just not necessary. I think a person might be smart enough to do the only thing that they can possibly do on the page.
Then there were the accusations. I didn't even need any clues, because you literally have to pick the right person or it just takes you back to the page so you can guess again. Not to mention there's only five people to accuse.
There was absolutely no backstory or emotion at all in this story. The low amount of detail contributed to the crap factor of this flaw.
on 3/14/2017 7:14:58 PM with a score of 0
If this was a newbie attempt: Hey, good try. You got the systems right, and you made a complete, if short, story. Try working on your description length and quality, and you'll be okay.
If not: Nnneughhguhgl.
on 2/1/2017 12:14:25 PM with a score of 0
The story was kinda weird. Potions? And the items really didn't do anything. It was obvious who the killer was though.
on 12/22/2016 9:30:50 PM with a score of 0
i love this game i just wish that it added more to the story like make the murder hide for a bit then you find out who it is
-- sara on 12/21/2016 3:46:42 PM with a score of 0
Fell flat, not enough detail in the story and the potions were pointless.
on 11/29/2016 8:36:12 AM with a score of 0
Wow, I was barely paying attention, and I still chose the correct dude.
on 6/4/2016 8:25:43 PM with a score of 0
If you use the animal potion on the page where you hit the link to the choice page it has no links. Please fix that.
on 2/21/2016 10:35:10 AM with a score of 0
(the murderer) killed Patrick bacause Patrick asked him to do it? Wierd. But I kind-off got it when I read the torn piece of the letter: He said he will be gone soon, the murdere would not let him whrite the letter if else.
on 5/27/2015 11:40:51 AM with a score of 0
A potion that turns you into an animal? What the heck were you before? A fungus? Well, judging by this story, I am inclined to think you have a brain made of fungus at the least.
First, the system of naming the killer is flawed, because someone can easily cheat by going back and picking each of the options until they find the killer.
Also, what is the significance of the potion? You only use it once. Any time after that, it serves no purpose at all.
And, what about your sister? You did a very poor job of creating a backstory.
on 11/9/2014 9:48:08 AM with a score of 0
I only had to examine the objects and investigate one person before figuring it out.
on 10/26/2014 3:39:24 AM with a score of 0
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