Vias

Player Rating3.96/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 43 ratings since 12/17/2015
played 375 times (finished 50)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

This is an insignificant story in this insignificant town, about love and a child growing up. This Byll's story.

 

BIG thanks to Spacecats for their invaluable testing of the game (http://chooseyourstory.com/Member/?Username=Spacecats)

If you have any questions about the game, feel free to message me :)

Player Comments

Hmm... just thought that the miss fighting style reminds me of missy as in Miss, feminine style. ;D
-- TestingJest on 12/8/2017 1:11:00 AM with a score of 0
Wow. The font just surprised me greatly. I actually needed to lean back. Work on your spelling and grammar please. :)

It started off as mostly dialogue, and I had a vague idea of setting, though it wasn't bad.

The story was pretty good. :D Your use of words and description was decent. For some reason, it didn't actually hook me. Perhaps you could also work on that?
-- Crescentstar on 1/2/2017 5:38:34 PM with a score of 0
3/8 too many spelling mistakes and many of the words are incorrect. Distracted too much from the story. I cant really say if I liked it or not because I got to a point i just wanted to get out of the story and clicked randomly. If the grammar spelling and the wrong words were corrected, I think this would be much more interesting
-- JinDary on 2/12/2016 2:26:45 PM with a score of 0
Quite long, very humorous at points. Overall a really superb story :)
One more thing, have you proofread your story? There were a couple of points where I had to re-read sentences. But other than that, you made a very good job on it.
-- Shadowulf on 12/17/2015 10:32:08 AM with a score of 0
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