Wolf's Story

Player Rating3.04/8

"#886 overall, #119 for 2015"
based on 327 ratings since 03/20/2015
played 3,138 times (finished 326)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Umm....first game... Ok, lets get started! You are starting off as a newborn wolf pup. You will either become a strong pack leader, or an adventurous loner. Good luck and the are three different endings! But, like, fifteen different ways to end it.

Player Comments

I'm not here to be rude, so don't get worried about this comment. ^^

I think a way you could improve the story is letting the reader have more choices for you to pick. Rather than focusing on getting a mate, what about raising my wolf's rank in the pack? Or maybe I discovered a dangerous secret that could threaten the pack - or maybe I get captured by humans! There's lots of parts where it seems like you were eager to publish the story a bit too soon.

Another thing: the Loner choice wasn't so great... I was hoping I would get to roam the woods or something by myself. I think the decision to put lots of the same endings side-by-side, giving no hope for exciting stuff as a loner, was a bit disappointing. There has to be something I can do other than search for mates! Focusing on survival and hunting, among other things, are what could happen - especially if I'm a wolf.

Overall, this currently seems more like a... wolf dating sim than anything else. I enjoyed it a lot though - you must've put lots of work into it! I would enjoy possibly a sequel, a prequel or even an update to this magnificent story!

3/8, but not bad for a first game!
-- Wolfrunner on 3/27/2015 7:41:21 PM with a score of 0
Haha whenever I read these stories I like to imagine fur-fic-fans being let into an enclosure to pet a couple of grey wolves that haven't been fed for a few weeks to see how cute they really are then ("Aw, come here you... what! No! ARRGGHH! My face! My favourite arm!"):D Fortunately in these stories wolves seem a bit more... teddy bearish.

This story was pretty good though, the writing was ok but some of it seemed a bit strange, for example I've never been asked before on a scale of 1-10 how excited I am about meeting someone because I don't usually express my emotions in numbers but possibly it made planning the story easier. Also the "cool" and "let's go" links at the beginning both travelled in the same direction which isn't really a choice :D

Finally I'd suggest more options at the beginning, choosing your gender and coat is ok (though personally I wanted to be a blue and green wolf with octagon eyes because then the coat choice might have had an impact on the story) but if you're going to do that you might as well include name options.

Overall not bad though and playing through to the different endings was fun but the idea is a familiar one and sometimes I wish my wolf/cat/dog/turtle character found himself in a moral dilemma or genuinely emotional situation or possibly even just an attack on a camp of scouts :)
-- Will11 on 3/20/2015 8:06:24 PM with a score of 0
This was riddled with errors, but for a first try and an animal perspective game, it was ... better than most WC fanfics, anyway.

You still have plenty of room for improvement, James has some good points in his review, and I'd advise looking into the articles and studying the more popular games on the site to see what you can learn from them.

I'm a bit disappointed that you only get one possible name per gender regardless of physical appearance, but that's a nit-pick I guess.

Actually, my issue with the naming thing is more so the names themselves. 'Draco' is kind of bizarre as a wolf name. It means 'Dragon' and wolves have literally no reason to have any association with dragons at all. Unless your story has a dragon in it and I just totally missed that part, I guess.

The girl name is ... interesting. "Kilra" would logically be pronounced "Kill-ruh" so I have no idea where you got "Kyra" from. >_> Or wait, maybe I do. :P I have a sneaking suspicion I've seen that name in another story before. >.> Gee, I wonder which one it was... -_-' hmmm...
-- Kiel_Farren on 3/20/2015 12:00:09 PM with a score of 0
the story was way to short. I NEED A LONGER STORY. it took only a little bit. im very sad. :(
-- Karo on 5/26/2020 12:39:21 PM with a score of 0
Gotta say i love this game and that there is diffrent outcomes depending on what you choose
-- Grady on 5/2/2020 2:16:54 AM with a score of 0
good now can i play
-- tiko on 4/25/2020 8:49:45 PM with a score of 0
I don't really like this
-- Janice on 3/24/2020 8:30:13 PM with a score of 0
To short sorry
-- Gacha cat on 1/2/2020 2:38:01 PM with a score of 0
eh its not that good but its not bad :/ needs work
-- Alex on 10/21/2019 6:10:41 PM with a score of 0
maby make it a real game where you can play
-- htrh on 9/12/2019 12:51:52 PM with a score of 0
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