You'd better hide...

Player Rating3.38/8

"#448 overall, #48 for 2006"
based on 130 ratings since 02/04/2007
played 1,442 times (finished 162)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

A primates Adventure         

A man lies dead in the forest, and you weep on the rock where he met his fate, his blood still fresh on your hands. Why would such a thing happen? You know that they haven't noticed that he's missing now, but just you wait.

 You'd

         better

                   Hide.

Keep your eyes open to just about every item that comes. You'll need most of them. I'll reward the user that wins this game with untold riches that no one would guess. It's very hard. So don't say I didn't warn you.

Player Comments

Pretty bad, i'm sorry to say.

The first issue I noticed was the effort put into this. Judging from the length and the few sentences on most pages, you obviously didn't spend a lot of time on this.

The length of course isn't the only problem. There was also a huge lack of quality. The first page was decently written, but then the rest seemed extremely random, illogical, and undetailed.

Most situations seemed to randomly happen for plot convenience, and a lot of the choices are very illogical.

Very, very sloppily written no doubt, with almost no character development, extremely limited detail, and a very confusing and random plot that's introduced and put into action with almost no description of why.

Overall, I feel like this could have been written in about thirty minutes. You need to work a lot harder when writing storygames, because this obviously had very little effort put into it :(

1/8.
-- MinnieKing on 6/29/2017 6:48:50 PM with a score of 0
It was kinda short, but i enjoyed it!
-- StarReider on 9/27/2017 10:42:37 AM with a score of 2
I don't see any way to win. ?
-- Quorrah on 2/26/2017 9:47:25 PM with a score of 0
Lol I got smuggled into another country
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/19/2016 9:09:00 AM with a score of 2
I guess I got the best ending text read: Be a good ol' boy in your new country. Peace out
-- CowBoySkinnyLinny on 12/11/2016 4:40:07 PM with a score of 2
cool
-- Voltage on 11/29/2016 7:00:39 PM with a score of 1
got it.final line"be a good boy in your new country"
-- epix on 10/13/2016 6:22:47 PM with a score of 2
It's certainly better than anything I could do and I got a pretty good ending. Plus, the name of the last shop mentioned cracked me up. Wonderful work!
-- MysteriousShad27 on 3/19/2016 7:51:05 PM with a score of 2
I made it
-- corgi213 on 9/20/2015 9:26:13 AM with a score of 2
You think I was born yesterday?" cop cries.
"Yes"
-- corgi213 on 9/20/2015 9:17:24 AM with a score of 0
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