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Phantom of the Opera Choose your own adventure

8 years ago

Hello Everyone,

I'm starting up a Phantom of the Opera Choose your own adventure and I was wondering if anyone would like to review it.

Here's a link:

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-phantom-of-the-opera~3a-your-story 

Feedback and critiques would be lovely. Specifically, how do you like the story so far? Any thoughts on how it might end for some of the storylines. Do you wish for a better ending? Etc. 

It gets a bit lonely typing away at the computer all day, trying to create a game for fun.

Sincerely,

PhantomWriter44

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