Ugh, that was an ordeal. The second and probably last installment of Terra Proxima is now out. Please note some of it may be sloppy - I've never done such a sprawling thing before and plan to fix it up a bit later.
Go nuts.
moved to parlor room, will play on return from europe.
its too long
Hahaha, I don't think I've ever heard anyone complaining that a CYOA was too long.
It's been in development for a long time though, and my writing style has improved a bunch since I started it, so it might look kind of haphazard.