Hey guys, if you want to check out an unfinished storygame that I wrote two years ago, feel free:
Tristan
There are lots of unfinished paths but there are 75 long pages that lead to at least one finished ending. Make sure you choose knighthood and Goron's path to get to the juicy parts.
I think it's much better than OMS but still severely lacking in pacing and there are a significant number of grammatical errors. Still, I just wasted an hour re-reading it and it's actually pretty strong overall.
I won't be finishing it, so don't get your hopes up or anything, but I think it's worth a read just for what already exists.
