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Again, this is a bit off topic. But I just thought I'd let you guys know, I'm making "The Cry of The Raven" A little bit more longer and I am taking into consideration everyone's criticism and trying to improve on it.

EG: The scene where Zachary meets wolves I have made more pages longer to make the story have a few different paths. Instead of just one.

Move to Writing Workshop / Parlor Room?  o.o

It helps if you mention someone by name, rather than calling your request into the infinite void.

(maybe that's why prayers don't get answered?)