Since this hasn't received much attention, I don't mind helping with this. The idea sounds really good, and I'd love to help this grow.
I'm not a well-known person at all on this site (I've only been active ever since the quarantine started), so I understand if you think I'm not qualified.
Speaking of which, here's some edits for you from what I've seen on this page.
Wow, I went all out with this. Sorry if this was way too much.
Thanks for the feedback.
Segregation classes are segregated by race. It doesn't matter if the halls are crowded. Each race goes into their areas. In fact, there are three bunkers. White people, Americans not white and not white local population.
Chubby Dolores is not the teacher. Maybe I just have to call teacher fat to make it clear.
The Boom in the real scene is italicized, and separate. But Doing so here means have to code absolutely all text and is a pain in the ass.
Theodore appears in The next scene right where is cut.It can not be in our class as he is in military courses You, however, are with his twin sister class.
Thanks for the clarification! That makes a lot more sense now.
I thought Chubby Dolores was the teacher because it mentioned earlier that the science teacher was chubby as well, so I simply assumed that they were the same person. That was a mistake on my part.