COFindus, The Contributor

Member Since

9/3/2012

Last Activity

2/26/2017 1:19 PM

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150

Post Count

2

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

1 win / 3 losses

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Omgomgomg I managed to publish a game and it doesn't suck (that bad) :D

Oh and if you play my storygame(s) please please please, tell me what you would do different and how to improve it, I'm really dependant on you guys if it comes to stuff like that.

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Earning 100 Points

Storygames

My Apocalypse: On The Road Again (First Entry)

The Zombie Apocalypse and the first part of a (maybe sometime) epic story, whether you make it or not is up to you. This is my first try so please have mercy. (Recieved a comment so I decided to try and make something off the advise and clear the narrating up a bit)


TestingThings
unpublished

An attempt to do things


The Debt
unpublished

You are an excellent scientist, you always were. Genetics or whatever other field crossed your path you were easily able to excel, still somehow you never really managed to make anything of your talents and you and your wife already had to mortgage most of your things but your debts just keeps increasing...


Recent Posts

My Apocalypse Ain't No Rest For The Wicked on 11/5/2012 3:11:03 PM

Thanks for the answer! Im nowhere near 2000 pages but it's nice to see that Im not alone with the occasional lack of motivation. ^-^


My Apocalypse Ain't No Rest For The Wicked on 11/5/2012 1:54:39 PM

I don't know if this is the right place to put it, but here I go.

I made a storygame called MyApocalypse a while ago and it was considered ok by most, I would now say that this made me want to write a sequel but to be honest I intended doing so in the first place. Now the thing is there was some feedback and wanting to improve the entire thin I decided to make it longer and add pictures.

When I recently reviewed my past pages I found them to have way more text and pages than the first one in the attempt to improve it so it would not be as linear as the first one, the problem is that im starting to get the feeling that I'm writing to much per page and the different choices really let the number of pages skyrocket (at least in comparison to the last one) so I just wanted to  ask whether you believe that a large amount of text per page is negative or not.

On top of that I have recently lacked the motivation to continue writing, although I know where I want to go I often find myself distracted by searching for pictures. Any professional tips on how to solve my 'problems' would be highly appreciated.