A Minecraft Legend

I've tried both Single Player and Multiplayer paths, and... *sigh* 1/8. It deserves it.

Look. If it takes you only two days to write and publish this steaming shi--I mean, precious work of art, then you clearly rushed to print out the final copy. That's not good. You're not going to earn bonus points for writing a storygame in such a short amount of time unless you're submitting a contest entry (and even then, this game wouldn't reach the minimum standards and you'd be disqualified).

I just don't get what satisfaction I'm supposed to gain from this storygame. It was over in a few clicks. The pages were practically blank. The characters were dull and not described whatsoever. It was over in the blink of an eye, and I'm left bored and thinking that I've wasted my time. I honestly believe that I put more thought into writing this comment then you did writing the storygame I'm writing about.

And lemme get something straight, before you reply. We of CYS...most of us are not commenting on your game because we're "haters," "trolls," "bullies," whatever you want to call us. YOU decided to create this game, YOU decided to publish it, YOU decided to put this out in the open for the entire Internet to see and review. Once you click that publish button, your game is vulnerable to anyone and any comment and any criticism you're going to get. It is YOUR choice whether or not you want the world to see something that has little to no effort put to it. We're not to blame for crappy ratings; you are. And we are NOT haters, bullies, trolls, etc. We're offering constructive criticism that will help you improve as a writer and a member of CYS.

For a 1/8 length story about Minecraft this had better writing than I expected, but I'm still left wondering what the point was.

Also, how did Blake get into my single player game. H4x????

This was just too short and lacking in content to be enjoyable. The actual basics were all in place but you definitely need to expand upon it for it to count as a real cyos.

Double or Tripple the amount of text per page and lengthen each path, too many are just one click from death which removes any illusion of choice.