Lab Creature DIY

I had a lot of fun with this game. I was hoping to keep the octopus and I did. It was easy to play. The storyline and writing made me curious as to what was next, very engaging and entertaining.

This game was very entertaining. I thought the storyline was very ongoing and it was also something unexpected, which makes the reader and user interactive and excited. I had somewhat control of the game, but not necessarily. I felt like the objective of the story is really good as well.

I like the way you always give us a choice for the story which depends on reader's preference. Your story was short but in detail so it was easy to understand the situation. I like how you described when we add the scorpion or octopus to the mouse. I would like to see this story more!!

Some parts felt a bit cringy, but I felt the need to know more about the story. I felt engaged and was able to control the actions in the story. The reading length for all the routes was a good amount at 7 mins. Only part I felt like that needed more attention was grammar issues like the "Benefactor" and pronouns.