Ocean's Story

cats don't know what fairies are

cats don't know what fairys are

I feel like this game could've been much more interactive on a lot of the pages, and you could've put more emphasis in the personality of the characters and getting to know them. It was okay, but could've been better with more choices.

:( The writing was bland. I got no feelings of emotion for any of the characters, and I found myself reading through pages only because I felt I needed to in case I accidentally died because of something I didn't know. This game could have been a lot more interesting. 2/8

Terrible, but better then your first 2.
2/8

Half the links you can't even click

pretty good but the grammer is everywhere. here is your random


8/8 !!!!

Worst. W=C. Roleplay. Ever.

um...cats don't know what fairies are and they don't exist. and there are hardly any choices.

Please don't write again. 1/8

Well it isn't... absolutely terrible. But needs some looking at and grammar check.