School and Cool

This was a very cute little game.and the plot wasn't that bad I'm going to see if there anymore endings but I just appreciate that I don't have to fear some unrealistic and gory death from an option.it was a little rushed but I appreciate the effort and time you put into it.(and also don't take comments too personally.peoples comments are often influencd by others and people become more judge mentol online.just remember to only focus on constructive criticism because people who be offensive are not the people you should take advice from.)good luck on your next story if you do one.

Cool game!

To begin with: I actually rather liked this story! (in response to the comment at the end)

Good: A lot of things that are actually VERY uncommon on CYS
NO grammar mistakes
An actual PLOT
Lots of options and endings

Bad: Very few (one)
Slightly unrealistic. You just walked up to Warner and he liked you? But sometimes I need a happy ending, so congrats! Loved your story! 6/8

Great make more just like it

I really wished there were more options. If I have a phone and Warner also has a phone, why can't I just call/text him to see which restaurant we're going to?
Who is Beth?? Why does she matter at all?
Why can't I date Caitlyn?

Choose Freddy to be your boyfriend

This Stroy Is Pretty Good. A little bit cliche but good I had a fun time with it. The only thing I can find wrong with it is that it,s a little short maybe edit to add more choices. I know this could take a long time to make so maybe I could help or give suggestions. I provided my email so If you want me to give you some suggestions on how to make the story longer and meaningful choices. I give this story 6/8 becuase Nothing is better Than Resse cups

It's good!

it was realy good

Pretty good