Star Wars: A Padawan's Journey part 8: War

It’s so sad please. Continue i am crying over here :(

This was a pretty good game to say the least.It also seems no accessible unless you use a secret method.With is kinda cool

The story was good sometimes a bit confusing, with all the different character shifts but over all a good story

Not well written

Left me with wanting more

Towards the end I held onto every word if I did not know that was the end I would have hated it, but since I know there is another one coming that was great.

Again, another good story, but until we have more choices you cannot climb higher than a 6/8. There needs to be a way to save everyone, or to lose everyone (as it shows), or to only lose certain people. The only time to get to choose what to do is when you are fighting or exploring, and those usually end up having only one way to go. This isn't a choose-your-own-adventure, this is a story

For all who read, this is NOT the last episode, he says so on his page. He said he was only half way done so there's gonna be like 14 chapters or something

Got an idea, I have! You know that stare that a sith can use that makes u imagine your death? Well maybe Pauk really is the traitor and used it on you when you saw him. Although shin died Kreia and Samdul didn't and maybe something happens like this...

You re-awaken from a day dream from a sudden splash to the face. Now awake you look around you.

"Didn't I just die?" you think to yourself, unfazed by the giant amounts of water that hit you along the face.

A groaning gets your attention and you turn to see Samdul and Kreia laying on their backs besides an escape pod.

"Where am I?" you ask yourself. You look around you and see trees as far as the eye can see. You move over to Kreia and Samdul and quickly glimpse to where you remembered Pauk and the masked man appear."Was I dreaming?" you continue to question your self while you stagger towards the escape pod.

"Kreia! Samdul!" you shouted at their seemingly unconscious bodys. Although you sense they are still with you, you fear that they may have sustained some major injuries.

"*coughs* well that could have gone better..." you hear in that all too familiar voice. Samdul sits himself up and rushes to your side. Well you assume it was a rush but you knew how hard you'd all fallen so it wasn't surprising to see him so ridged.

"You okay?" you say bluntly.

"No I am not okay" he says in a matter of fact tone."if you're talking physically wise I appear to be okay, I'm just a bit shaken up..."

You approach the man and you both support each others weights. You turn the both of you around and extend a finger but Samdul is already moving his legs.

"Kreia!" you both shout in unison as you head to her unconscious body. It seems to take a life time to reach her, although you are only a few meters away. You both drop to the ground and check her wounds...It appears Kreia has taken the blunt of the fall...

Although you had a feeling she was alive, the injuries she sustained has put her in a crippled state... Her left leg appeared broken and at the very least was dis jointed, she had many cuts and scrapes bleeding all over and her injured rib cut she had gotten when fighting (insert his name here, I can't remember) was now at least twice it's size and bleeding insanely.

You think back to the first time you met, you didn't know her name and she was strong. Now if you don't find medicine or at least medical plants your friend will face death...for real this time...Then you get an idea.

"Kreia! Kreia can you hear me?!" Says Samdul, the Tone in his voice is concerned and you can tell he also feels her presence.

You have an idea, although you are unsure of its outcome you decide that it's worth a try. You hover your hands just above Kreia's chest. A look of confusion crosses Samdul's face.

"What ARE you doing?" he adds extra emphasis to the ARE part.

"Trying something"

"What are you trying?" his questioning is irritating you.

"Look I've been practicing a healing technique behind my masters back, okay? I need to concentrate so please shoosh." You know that you don't have a lot of energy left and this technique is draining to say the least. You go over the summary you wrote up in one of your vlogs. The "Force healing" as you called it required a slow transmission of the force from one persons body to another, healing it in the process. But it can also be used like a defibrillator, once enough energy is transmitted the transmitter quickly adds a jolt of energy to shock the person and jump start their body. You might have to attempt your second technique .You haven't had any practice on a person yet and haven't even fully thought the second use through but it was worth a shot.

As if he read your thoughts Samdul turns to you and puts his hands above yours and starts to give you his force energy. You can feel it building up in you and the power is almost overwhelming, you never knew Samdul had such a reserve of energy, you kept on transmitting your new acquired energy from your body to Kreia and you can already see some of the cuts and bruises fading and the bleeding from all around her body is stopping slowly and although she is looking much better it still looks like her body needs a jumpstar and without even thinking you start pumping as much energy as you can into her body and with the final energies in your body you shock her body...

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Really, really awesome but I got so into the story that I'm on the verge of crying...And I'm not one that gets sulky a lot so well done. Kinda ended on a cliff hanger though. Doesn't tell you about the war or anything. You should continue this. I don't know how but I feel the MC needs to live and settle things right. This padawan has gotten so far but for what? I think it needs to carry on so please somehow do it...