Player Comments on A demo, should I finish it?

Alright, but a bit linear at times.

Too short but understandable since its a demo. I think it could turn into something great with some effort. :)

This was too short to gauge but it was fun. I like the suspense that builds as you try to decide what to choose.

Great start, although the box with the weapons was more like an armory in a box, lol, love it!

this might be better as a puzzle and the creepy voice in the beginning wasnt makin it any better

It doesn't have an ending, but at least I got some cough syrup.

No.

Gah! Finish it! I need to know what happens next!

I like the idea of a creepy voice talking to you. I could see this as a great horror story.

A bit odd, it seems to have no real storyline.

Definately need to finish this. If you do, it WILL be featured, and people WILL enjoy it.

GOING TO UNPUBLISH AND FINISH THIS NOW!

Could be the start to a fun game but it barely begins so I couldnt rate it very high. If you make the full thing let me know.

I believe this story has some potential as a great game. I was definitally intrigued when it said that dying was a key factor. Please finish it!

Well, I got my supplies. I should be content.

Could you make this a bigger, better storygame? Because there's a potential.

Well, the writing was not bad, but seriously, demos are not a good way to get high ratings. Everyone will rate it pretty low because it's unfinished. When it's finished, it might turn out to be a great story, so just unpublish this and go for it.

Only if you add choices...

YES make more lots more

Way too short, but it has... potential.

The medicine vs. weapons boxes was sort of odd. If there is a note there needs to be a way to figure out which is which, otherwise the note is completely pointless.

A suggestion: Next time, you don't want to come out with an instant-death page without luring in the reader first.

It seems to have promises, I'd read more if it was continued in this story, but would not like to see more "chapters" of comparably short length.

Not bad. Would like to see more, but if you make it longer I'd try to add some trickier puzzles and more humor to the game.

Pretty much, if you're going to take the trouble to make a demo and get slaughtered for it (which you will), just go ahead and make the best COMPLETE game you can. That's kinda the whole point: make and play games. It's no fun for anyone to do a tiny demo and then wait and see if something interesting comes of it. Anyway, it was fine, so far as I could tell. Linear, short (obviously) but I'm at least interested in what it may become.

Well, gee, I have this idea for a review that I think is pretty good, but I'm not sure if I should fini-

The only thing I can say about this game is that it has average grammar. I couldn't care about the character, what was happening, or anything. But that's the problem with demos. You only give a small portion of the game, which makes it impossible to choose whether it will be good or not. 3/8

Countinue it or not, this demo reveals nothing that makes me interested in what will happen.