Player Comments on A Web of Dreams

Meh. It was okay but way too short. Literally every ending is “you wake up and it’s all a dream”. 2/8.

I don't dispise the writing. To short to warrent any praise though

Not bad. Fun, short, does what it says on the tin. :3

Is it a dream in every ending? I confess that I tried but I’m not sure I got every possible ending. But that’s a good thing for you! It means there were plenty of endings and options, and that’s definitely good.

.I didn’t see any noticeable grammar mistakes, and there was a nice plot to this. I am a little sad about the whole dream thing, though. The story was also short, but I’m aware that it was meant to be so.

My final rating is 7/8

It's a bit disconnected and jarring.

It was certainly short, if you don't like it it'll be over soon

Fun short adventure.

This is a genuinely bizarre, yet amusing game. Its good for short breaks from homework.

Got bored playing this. Meh.

Not good... No real ending that I've found. Story makes no sense and has a cliché "Woke Up from a dream" ending.

Being short was an advantage to this game, though it probably could have stood to having a few more paths. Otherwise the dream feeling was very well constructed and the descriptions were fleshed out without dragging on.

The "falling into a new area" thing was kind of overused even for a game so short. Other than that, it's alright. I would like to see it have some sort of coherent plot line one day.

That was a fun dream

Honestly, it is a good story game even tough it short

A nice short story!

The writing was very good. You put a lot of effort into the details of the dreamworld which made reading through very interesting. However, it was very short, which isn't always a problem, but for this kind of story I think it sort of is. The detail was very good, but the pages were few, so even with the creativity in the individual pages, the flow is cut short suddenly with an end game screen. I'm not normally a fan of the "And then I woke up and it was all a dream" ending, but because of the detail you put into the dreamworld, you almost pulled it off, I'd just liked to have seen a longer story.

Too short.

I like it! It's creative and odd, but with a sense of humor to it that people want to see in storygames. Great job.

I have nothing against short storygames, but for a story like this, I think that it really could've been longer. The descriptions are really good despite the length. The dream quality of this storygame allows for lots of different possibilities, and that's where the story falls short.

My mouth says 2 but my brain says 4

Well the writing was decent but considering the whole game was meant to be a dream, I think that dream could've gotten a lot weirder :p

Same choice over and over and over again! No dialogue. To short. I was expecting something much better.

I will admit, the story is definitely pretty short. Despite the length, the amount of descriptive details for each page was really good.

The ending was a well-constructed plot twist as well. I came out of this story feeling pretty satisfied.

It was very interesting. Though I wish it were longer, my dreams have more segments than that.

Ripped into pieces :(.....
Fun story, but short though.