Player Comments on An Escape From The Top

It's a bit too easy to die or win, and lacks any real storyline. However, at least it is typed properly. And I got through it first shot and played it again, and there isn't really any other way you can go without dying. A bit linear, but it was typed properly and it had a gorilla in it so a four/five (can't remember which).

Maybe make it longer. AND MORE RANDOM!!!

Yay beat the game

I don't mind random stuff it can be funny but this was lame.

WOW.... i feel bad for the spider :''(

I liked the beluga whale. She was my spirit animal.

funny but to easy

Way to easy

very enjoyable

Random, But Cool!

That was REALLY random.... A gorilla? XD I had to backtrack a few times, but I think it was a pretty good game, maybe not tell us to stay away form the elevator though?

Random usually isn't very good in the first place, but the characters are very simplistic. We can't even determine Aaron's gender. The fifth floor randomly jumps to the second floor.

Thank you for the endorsment. It was meh, a bit random and linearish.

Not good

Pretty dire. Not much text but a *lot* of typos. I don't mind randonmess as such, but here it seemed even more pointless than usual. Overall the game has all the hallmarks of something written in the space of half an hour and probably not even tested. Not one I could recommend to anyone.

Yeah! I actually won!
I thought it was going to
be hard!
5/8

i dont mind it being random but at least it should make sense

I got thrown into a warp hole....by galobtter!

Pretty random but its not that bad.

nice work done

what?

Hahaha. I love how you have so much fun making people die. XDD

really random

Too random, some deaths didn't make sense

... Well, it's definitely random.

I made it to the Walrus. There was no way I could have known which door would lead out. This isn't fun, it's lame.

Nice one!:))

I think it does what it sets out to do

awesomly awesome!pz make more

oh god.. a spider that talks

again, like your other game, it's too intertwining. let there be more variety, it wouldn't let me go backwards!

I thought all the randomness was rather silly. It didn't really add to the story (which I didn't understand because of the randonmess) at all. There are ways to make your story "random," but this isn't really the way to go about it. I thought your writing was great.

Good work trying to create chaos. Unfortunately, you can't make something "random." I really wish people would stop thinking confusing nonsense makes something "random." It makes me want to rip my eyes out.

I would normally give this a 3, but because some of the best games on the site get 1's, I have to grade comparatively.

Therefore, forced to give this a 1.

You have to understand the concept of giving the player interesting, meaningful, logical decisions and outcomes. Otherwise gameplay doesn't exist...

It's ok.

Really random stuff isn't my thing. There was sort of an underlying plot, though. Keep writing.

4/8. You made me laugh. The grammar is better and the story doesn't completely suck, for a random one. Maybe you should write some more funny (not random) stories. I think you should look at Ducky Park by donteatpoop. Inspiration, perhaps?

DS

Winner winnner chicken dinner! srry :)
Good game, and yes random, but a decent random. Nice little game you've got here.

Keep on writing!

You know what I think of pure randomness. And if you don't, find out.

Anyway, you totally stole "The Elevator is a LIE" from Portal.

Grammar was good. For you.

I liked it better than your fist.
A few things. Firstly: The Warning on the Game Description shouldn't be there. Also, try giving us some idea what to choose, it's not fun when it's: Left, your dead. Right, YOU WIN!
4/8 (your last one was a 2/8)