Any reasone?

First of all, grammar. Second of all, more explanation as to the murder of your parents or the rape scene. I get that your brother knocked you up, but why does your sister not do anything about the murder? It is a really good plot and I feel that if you worked on it you could really have something. Also, please correct the title. I do believe you are onto something, so I gave you a 6/8. Do some serious touchups, though. Okay? Thank you for considering my comments.

Dark stories like this can be really good when written well, but this story really needs more explanation of the situation you're in and how you got there. For instance, if your brother murdered your parents, why aren't the police involved? Especially if your sister knows he did it. Also there were a lot of spelling mistakes, which is why it's always important to proofread your stories before you publish them.

Yeah so this sucks

This was a great fap 10/10

interesting.

Are there more than two endings?

Short but dark as heck! The typos were aggravating and I'd like to have been able to delve more into the back story and find out more.

Twisted...
Just Twisted...

Foremost are the grammar and spelling issues. These are easily fixed. The subject matter is pretty intense and provocative, but does need more depth. Kudos for having the spunk to address such a dark subject.

I think the person who wrote this is mentally ill.

Use a spell checker for your incest rape stories please.