Player Comments on Can u get through

Ehehhe

— Isanshan on 6/11/2015 3:24:50 PM with a score of 0

Yay! I won!

— Beardon87 on 6/11/2015 2:41:04 PM with a score of 0

The fact that you state in the description that this game is "possibly pointless" just tells me you weren't planning on putting any effort into this in the first place. Terrible grammar mixed in with a non-existent plot, this doesn't even deserve a 1. It deserves a 0 - as in it isn't even worth my time.

When you come onto a writing site, you should atleast respect it enough to integrate a decent amount of effort into your writings. Writing horribly without the intention to improve not only wastes our time, but yours as well.

— Xiro on 6/11/2015 4:47:44 AM with a score of 0

This was short and not very interesting. You spelt quite a lot of words wrong and didn't use correct grammar or punctuation. There was no plot or detail to the pages, and it was all guesswork. There weren't even clues to discover what was right, and it was extremely linear. Besides, if you yourself say its pointless and boring, why publish it?

— AngelOfThatThing on 6/10/2015 11:11:32 PM with a score of 0

Plain HORRIBLE

*Bad story
*Bad writing
*Bad grammar
*Random deaths
*One path
*Horrible gameplay

It's even worse than WC games.

1/8

— Deathdefender on 6/10/2015 2:45:35 PM with a score of 0

If you call your own game pointless and bad shouldn't you take the time to make it better?

— _Zomby_ on 6/10/2015 8:44:30 AM with a score of 0

... What did I just read?

— Bolt78625 on 6/10/2015 6:25:32 AM with a score of 0

Another story with random deaths at every corner. . .
This can't even be considered a game or a story. Much less a storygame! This could've been made way better if it had a plot, a theme, and characters.

— Penworth on 6/10/2015 2:05:36 AM with a score of 0

Wow..... Why publish this if even YOU think it's pointless?

— AthenaT on 6/9/2015 10:39:54 PM with a score of 0

I wouldn't describe falling as a "slow descent". Also, there are no hints as to the right path. It's all guessing.

— jamescoker1226 on 6/9/2015 9:14:26 PM with a score of 0

This story is a waste of time as the choices are all random. For those who will read this story for the free point (which is it's only value) the right choices are first-first-second-first, five clicks and the "story" is done. Try writing a quiz or put characters, a plot, different settings etc in your story...

— Will11 on 6/9/2015 8:11:22 PM with a score of 0

Super short, and you keep spelling "you" wrong. That's almost the easiest word to spell.

— fernflame on 6/9/2015 8:08:14 PM with a score of 0

My only issue is that the choices are random, instead of based on logic.. For example, if you looked on the wall and saw a triangle engraved in it, and then there's a square panel and triangle panel, the reader would know to choose the triangle. Use little hints and stuff to let us know what to do. It doesn't have to be as obvious as the triangle example, but still.. This was pretty much a guessing game.

— DMnv12 on 6/9/2015 7:18:43 PM with a score of 0

What the hell, man? Don't make this kind of game ever again!

— Raven47 on 6/9/2015 7:15:51 PM with a score of 0

No. No. No....

— At_Your_Throat on 6/9/2015 6:19:12 PM with a score of 0

...ok

— dragon396 on 6/9/2015 5:07:04 PM with a score of 0