Player Comments on Ghostly Mystery

Very nice story; well written with nice pictures. Also tells a good story about atropos and so forth. I would have rated this higher and probably included it in my list, but for some problems. A few times topics come up that the reader knows nothing about, so feels weird asking. Also, there's not enough background on who you are and why you're visiting this lady. Furthermore, you can only meet one ghost.

It poop

It was okay. It had a sort of bland ending but it was overall, interesting.

better than school worse than cafeteria food, decent, short, and above all else, them ghosts was smokin hot

good job, just from context clues and 1 end i could figure out all of the ghosts.

Very short. You have a good premise that seems like the start to a much bigger story but then ends quickly, would have liked to have seen more details and backstory of the characters.

Ok, kind of boring.

Omg! The young woman was weaving the thread of life and the old white lady cuts it!

it was okay 4/8

Uhh, well this started off really interesting, but I never got to help the woman or solve the mystery. Is the best ending you can get chickening out and going home?

...Is there a point? I mean, there's really no way to get an ending where you "win." A game isn't much of a game if you can't win.

can you win? it was a good story though

it was alright

awwww! i lost.... i'm not a thief!

I loved your story! I wish there was more to the ending, but I liked the parallel you drew. Great job!

Sounded promising. Wish there was more.

A good ghost story, where the ghosts actually have personalities, and good writing too. If only there was a real resolution...

better than expected: better than most in the category. Not much resolution provided here though, and not much of a story.

This story is worth every cent. It's a great story, and I just love ghost stories, and mysteries (play DARKFALL on the PC if you haven't, it's a great ghost story game). 6/8

Excellent writing and very interesting story, and if you expand on it more, It would really work well.

Liked it. I remember the Morai sisters from Hercules but wouldn't have remembered them without this game. Well done.

neat story

Intersesting story.

It was pretty good, wasn't much action but good grammer, neat and tidy sentences with some explantation let me give you a high mark for me 5/10.

I died on purpose but that isn't the point. This game if you ask me from looking at the title I say this belongs under mystery. Good job on making it to the top 6 though.

i like it!

great game, i lost, i guess.

This game is the biggest load of hogwash I have ever experienced in my 82 long years. This will be the last time I ever use this 'internet' evil and start replacing my porn collection with a wholesome ferret collection.<br><br>May Satan have mercy on your soul,<br><br>Sir Farran Daw OBE

Okay... I understand there's something about the white ghost but there is a lot that is left unanswered. You should write more on this story and give at least one ending where you get to the bottom of things.

Excellent!

I asked about the white lady and got kicked out. Still, it was fun. I'm going to play again.

dID i WIN?

umm ok i guess it was ok

Interesting, but I reached the end too quickly.

This game was pretty cool, but there isnt a good ending. maybe i just played poorly and didnt get to it, but i dont think thats the case. the author did a pretty good job with the story, but the spelling errors were noticeable, and the pictures werent very good. still, the game was fun and definitely worth playing. the author has talent, but needs to put a little more work into each piece.

this was one of the first games i ever played on this site but i never left a message. but ive played it again and i love it. this game was one of the ones that made me sign up and try to write my own. thanks for the good story.

nice mystery, kinda scary. Write a story about the well

Interesting Game, and hopefully will inspire others to create ghost related games. It could certainly be longer and have a bit more of a plot line however to be really a great game.<br>march

I have my suspicions that Ms. McPhail is Morai? huh no maybe. What interest do you have in the Moraii? you should talk a bit on the message board. I like your game.