Player Comments on Gunslinger
This story sets the mood at the beginning and never lets up. Almost instantly, you can identify with the character of the gunslinger, and you are able to partake of the gritty feel of his story.
The writing is fantastic. It is highly descriptive, and allows you to "feel" the story along with the main character. The narrative flows, and carries you along its current to whichever end your choices lead. The dialogue is realistic, and stays consistent with the tone of the story.
This storygame does a good job with branching. The choices you make are very meaningful, and provide varying narrative paths. It is necessary to enjoy several different "stories" in order to view each different ending.
Overall, this story is fantastic, amazing, and should be on a must read list.
on 6/7/2022 10:08:26 AM with a score of 6
SHOULD I READ THIS?
Yes, it’s an entertaining read.
Preview: You play as a disillusioned and disaffected, but powerful, gunslinger, searching for direction in a frontier setting on the brink of disaster.
Basic Plot & Coherence: 4/5
Nothing like an execution to pull the reader into the story!
The story’s plot covers a couple of the possible reactions to an impending demon invasion, and how that invasion plays out with respect to the main character. Consistent with the dark tone of the story, it turns out there’s very little you can do to actually stop the invasion. In the only ending in which something close to this is achieved, it requires the sacrifice of your soul. The entire story seems like an intriguing exercise in futility, exploring the various ways the main character can fail to find direction. Oddly, I found this especially apparent in the “Death at midnight” ending, an ending with a relatively smaller scope than the others. The tight focus of the gunsligner’s conflict with the pair of natives shows all the more clearly how futile his efforts are.
Though the story contains plenty of action, it is much more introspective than anything else. The action serves more as a backdrop for the main character’s reflections than as an actual driver of the plot or character change.
One other thing I enjoyed about this story was the depth of the worldbuilding, even for the elements that were not fully explored. The system of magic in the world seems very interesting, both with how the main character is actually seen using it (such as for summoning his horse), and the musings the characters and narration have on it, such as Thomas’s recollection of magic being tamer in the east. The hints about elements like Goldwater and the setting’s dominant religion game the game a sense of depth, despite covering a period of relatively small scope.
Characters & Development: 4/5
The main character’s voice was what really jumped out to me from the start. In the beginning of the story, the narrator passively watches the destruction of Redshire after barely avoiding execution, and muses over the history of the town and the natives. While this could easily be a straight info dump, the unique tone of narrator’s reflections keep it interesting, and reveal important information about the character’s outlook. This internal monologue remains consistent throughout the work, tying the different events together through the gunslinger’s perspective.
The side characters showed plenty of depth as well, illustrated both through the consistency of their actions, and the gunslinger’s thoughts about them.
Mastery of Language: 3/3
I would say the use of language is the biggest strength of this game. The gunslinger’s narration is full of clever phrasing and metaphors that both set the mood and are a pleasure to read. The beginning immediately hooks the reader into a world with a specific tone, and keeps it up throughout the story.
Mechanics & Coding: 2/2 (usually 5)
This a mostly cave of time style game.
There’s plenty of branching. The player’s choices are meaningful and affect the course of the game. There is a wide variety of ways the story can end up spread throughout the 7 endings.
Player Options/fair choice: 2/2 (usually 3)
The consequences of the player’s actions are well foreshadowed, and there are no “gotcha!” deaths.
Each of the endings have their merits, but like many games on this site, this story is better viewed as a complete work rather than a series of disconnected stories. Each ending is made stronger by reading the ones surrounding it.
I definitely enjoyed this game, which is a testament to the skill of the writing, as I don’t usually enjoy games where the main character’s actions are so futile. Here, however, I felt that the gunslinger’s lack of direction added to the overall tone of the story rather than detracting from it.
CONCLUSION: 23/25 = 92%
on 9/1/2021 3:15:22 PM with a score of 6
— Killerdino24 on 8/14/2022 10:49:13 PM with a score of 7
it's nice, the writing is vivid and descriptive, defo worth reading :)
— - on 4/18/2022 9:18:31 PM with a score of 2
An enjoyable read, albeit a bit short, I'm looking forward to exploring the other paths. Evocatively written. Well Done.
on 12/1/2021 10:37:16 PM with a score of 2
I thoroughly enjoyed this and thought this was a really well written story with a strong, immersive narrative style - another excellent story from an excellent author :D
on 9/4/2021 1:40:37 PM with a score of 2
It doesn't have anything to do with the Stephen King series like I first assumed but the influence is obviously there. Much faster to read too.
Absolutely fucking loved this. So much style.
on 9/4/2021 7:58:31 AM with a score of 2
Liked it, feels like I have actual dirt and gunpowder residue under my nails.
on 8/31/2021 1:07:48 PM with a score of 1