Player Comments on If you alone > ChooseYourStory.com

... Well that was... Yeah. >.<

— Briar_Rose on 2/5/2014 11:42:12 AM with a score of 0

It's a pretty good game! I like the different options

— Panta19757 on 12/18/2013 5:36:28 PM with a score of 0

The premise was great... the execution was crap. If you remade this, gave it descriptions, a backstory, some depth, it'd be fantastic. Instead it's just kind of... "... eh."

— Kiel_Farren on 9/29/2013 8:48:14 AM with a score of 0

This...uh...needs a little (a lot) of work. It's not a terrible idea, but...well, it looks like you put almost no effort into it. Use details. Think of a few basic questions and center the story around them. Answering these questions will make it to where you a) add in more detail, and b) increase the depth somewhat. Hope that this helps =D.

— Rin_of_Water on 5/29/2013 5:31:09 PM with a score of 0

If You're* Alone

Just one of the overwhelmingly numerous mistakes made.

— ugilick on 5/27/2013 10:47:36 AM with a score of 0

No descriptions on the papers, and no real choice values.

— fergie14233 on 5/23/2013 4:53:51 PM with a score of 0

wtf

— alex_awesome on 5/13/2013 3:13:40 AM with a score of 0

For once, I'd have to agree with alienalpha. Just...

God, damn.

DAYUM.

— Swiftstryker on 5/11/2013 11:06:08 AM with a score of 0

The only good thing about this is the idea.Try harder because you didn't try at all in this one.

— Alexthethug on 5/7/2013 6:07:14 AM with a score of 0

Not even remotely half good.

— hugo23 on 5/6/2013 10:31:44 AM with a score of 0

WOW! Must be one of the games on the site that are made with no effort at all...

— Xt1000305 on 5/6/2013 8:55:21 AM with a score of 0

it takes a special kind of stupid to spell the name of your own game wrong

— JamesValkyrie on 5/5/2013 7:14:49 PM with a score of 0

Gave you the lowest score so no-one will ever read this and experience the crappiest game on this site. You put no effort in and half the 50 words are misspelled.

— alienalpha on 5/5/2013 5:28:35 PM with a score of 0

.... When writing their first storygame, people should not try as little as possible. This game was simply, and purely garbage.

I would critique the story, but there was no story. It was a half-assed attempt at nothing, and you succeed in wasting the reader's time.

— Aman on 5/5/2013 4:47:10 PM with a score of 0