Player Comments on Is it Shameful?

The story was, as all the other commenters said, short and sweet.

Alice was surprisingly well fleshed out for such a short story, she really does have a distinct and enjoyable to read personality.

A lot of the sentences were rather rough. One example is "She doesn't care you were being left out." \
It would flow better if it was "She doesn't care you're being left out." or "She didn't care you were being left out."

I would have preferred if the surroundings were described a bit more in the beginning, it would have helped set the tone of the story.


All in all, 4/8. Quite enjoyable, though rather short.

This was sweet. The English was a bit chunky but that's fine. I was confused by the lack of detail or any kind of explanation on the first page. it's just kind of jumbled and we're left to our first choice. Still, a short and sweet game.

6/10 +1 for sweetness

I adore this so much, it was very cute. :D

I think I understand what was being tried here but it lacks realism and explanation. I like the idea of moments and words but a bit more physical description would also be helpful too.

I just met you, and this is crazy...so c'mere and let me kiss you because you're the love of my life!

I'm an APH fan myself, but even I had a hard time understanding all of this ("older sister"?). The writing is nice, but even when I play as myself in the game, I'd still like to know more about me (in the game).

your target audience is really small. next time write to a bigger crowd.

Unless we know what the hell what realm you're on, and after plenty of hours with the Hetalia material slammed into our minds...

Maybe a reader MIGHT understand what this is.

It's ok...

Not bad.
One thing though, the player doesn't really know who Alice is, it would bring more depth if we knew why we loved her, or who we were at all.