Player Comments on Life as a Dog

...This was alright, I guess. The grammar was fine, for the most part, but that's the only positive thing I can say about it. Really, this game is just boring.

The main problems I had with it were;
-The game tends to force you into decisions, especially during the "Thorn Decides to Leave You" thing. If you choose to live alone, it'll tell you that you changed your mind- and to me, this is just lazy.

-If you choose to play tag after your mother leaves, you'll be brought back to the "See the World" (I think that's what it's called? eh i dunno) page. This was, hopefully, a mistake.

In the end, this game deserves it's 3/8, and that's what I'm giving it. It's not the worst thing ever, but it's not great, either. It's just sort of meh.

This is fuck who wants a game with only one right answer I’ll answer for you NO One so get a real life boy or just go to hell

First of all I wanted to be alone but is wouldn’t let you 2 this game is trash TRY BETTER or get a real life I’ll show my appreciation 🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻

dog

Stay far far away

Good, but should have more options and have more variety good game though ????

A little sad... a little short. Has potential.

It was ok but ok OwO UwU lwl nOwOn

i like the game

Extremely linear for the majority of the story. Being asked about whether I'm male/female near the end is just weird; you probably should have put it near the beginning, or not at all. It doesn't seem to have much of a plot or direction. 2/8.

One of the things I noticed was the fact that you open you're eyes in the first page, yet, a few links later, you open them again for the first time. I really don't get this, or if I misread it, but I'm confused.
Later on, when you 'Move out', you seem to be forced to live with Thorn. It seems like it's a cheap way to publish it and continue working on that link branch. I also noticed that you had to be male to really progress much further. Add the lack of choice and description, overall, I give it a 2/8.

more fun than old homework

A cute storygame. Short and simple, but I don't think you understnad how dogs work. I sense that you may have taken some inspiration from Warriors with this story but usually puppies in a litter have very similar coloring; plus green eyed dogs are either non-existent or extremely rare.

I didn't like how you made it dramatic for the boy but not for the girl it was a bit unfair don't you think

it's pretty awesome and well written

its ok but boring the plot goes too fast and really needs improvement

I have one big problem.

A man jumps out, and a female soon after. You turn around to run, but the man grabs you, and THE FEMALE THORN.

Isn't thorn your brother how can be both a male and a female? Unless... Just kidding. This is probably just a mistake. Please fix it. I found a few spelling errors here and there, I suggest you go over your work again or get someone to proofread it. This was a cute game but very short. I think you should add more detail to your childhood and the time you spend with your mate. Thanks!

This is good, but it could be a little better

Well, first of all.

"You play tag with Thorn.

A few days later, your eyes open!"

How can you play tag if your eye aren't open? There are probably dangerous things wherever you're playing. Also, not enough detail. This is really bad. I have much more to say, but too lazy. :P

Very interesting story. Maybe you could make it longer or make a second one?

It was linear, and I was forced into choices often. With some polishing, this can be a decent game.

Awsome you can make some good story games you should make more

I really didn't get it like was I girl or boy and where did the mother go did she come back and like I was confused so not the best I've played

Pretty good, but needs to be longer. Seems like you got bored said, you got a mate, lived a happy life, and here are your pup's names.

Kinda sounds like Warrior cats especially since they kinda have the same descriptions and sounds like the book A Dog's Life because of the scene where their brother is taken away

It was funny kinda it made u do things with out a choose tho

It was sad thorn got captred and River died.what if you made it longer and you met thorn againg and he decided to come back with you and you moved into the old shed and thorn into reds old den or somting like dat.

Nice story, but what happened to mother?

AWESOME! Much better than the warrior series, the warrior stuff is not that bad though i like this better.

nightsky i loved it but it ended when i had the pups message me any tips to get farther if you can :)

It was okay. Some parts were pretty ridiculous and didn't make sense. It was also a tad bit linear.

If you say that you "copied a bit" from that book, then label the game as a "Fan Fiction".

Very good for a new one