Player Rating1.01/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 40 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.


you are Jamie a guy who falls in love for jai a speedy thing

Player Comments

'u love someone what will u do?'

(obviously, kill her and start a group of mafia and kill people who don't vote for Donald Trump and is an Asian who loves Hitler... Then go back to your normal life to get a girl from a bar and confess to her saying 'eye luv u mary moi!1!1!!')

No seriously, this slowly kills me inside.
-- mj113 on 4/22/2016 1:28:06 AM with a score of 0
Just wow.
Don't even bother playing this game..
It's only...
Just WOW.
-- Shadowgirl_101 on 4/21/2016 8:43:13 PM with a score of 0
"u confess to her. the end."
I... I don't even... *facepalm*
-- Shadowulf on 4/20/2016 10:21:20 AM with a score of 0
All I'm going to say is PROOFREAD.
-- mattstat716 on 4/18/2016 8:38:07 AM with a score of 0
this was horrible! Should leave the girl!!
-- lisa on 4/18/2016 6:34:21 AM with a score of 0
this is a very weird stoy that's 5 lines long if u ant to add entertainment watch me on bgt.
-- samantha on 4/18/2016 6:33:56 AM with a score of 0
Wow I confessed I love her OMG
-- bren on 4/18/2016 2:28:20 AM with a score of 0
You have told me everything I ever wondered about the timeless and beautiful intricacies and mystery of love... you have educated me in a way that Shakespeare, Keats and Fifty Shades of Grey never could... incidentally u should be spelt you. It's not that hard: Y-O-U. Remember this advice and after this story is deleted your next story might show some improvement. To see other ways you could improve your writing style I suggest consulting the Help&Info Articles on here starting from the top and going through each one to the bottom because almost everything could be improved in that "story" :)
-- Will11 on 4/17/2016 10:39:49 PM with a score of 0
How is this even "advanced editor" anyway?
-- MarioRacer010 on 4/17/2016 10:18:23 PM with a score of 0
I don't even know where to begin. Uninteresting, nothing to it, mind-numbingly simple. I would say it's dull ,but it was too short to be dull, and there's nothing to it. I'm having more fun writing ths out than I did playing it, ashamed I couldn't give it a lower score.
-- hurpfry on 4/17/2016 10:01:51 PM with a score of 0
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