Player Comments on Popping My Cherry

Awhh, that was sweet ^_^
Got to say though, I did prefer the two stories from the girl's point of view rather than the two for the guys. The one with Bobby was really cute, and while Mike didn't seem particularly interesting as a character, the whole first time being really awkward thing did make the story seem quite realistic.
On the other hand, the two stories from the boy's point of view both involved random girls who the guys barely knew saying, "Hey, I'm feeling horny. You want to have sex?" ... Is that how most guys lose their virginity? I never knew :p

What the actual fuck

This is cute..I love it❤️

what the fu

awesome and unbelievably sexy!

what the fuck

Ayo what the fu-

JUICYYYY super good

what the actual fuck did i just read why were those ass holes laughing during seggs the fuck

pretty rushed but nice

I- I was not expecting this-

I loved this it was great!

dumb, literally took 1 minute to finish

I thought it was entertaining! Loved Jenny's good ending ;) And Sarah is best girl~

Decent, but very short with very few choices.

fuckin hate reeses' cups

I wanted more sexy with Jenny

Nice!

Crazy short, with the longest route being what, 5 pages?
Still, options galore, even if one or two are a "go the other way" reroute.

Not sure what some guest comments are on about by being smut and such, it is a 7/8 maturity level after all.

Nice wow no comment

WFT man... censore is in need here... realy..... way to forward and is pretty much about smut...@~@ gosh just..... gosh.

I got Mike! Short for Mike but cute!

This was really rushed, and I honestly have to say that I felt a little bit uncomfortable about the sex scenes that you had written. Otherwise, it was alright. :/

Loved it, but it was so short :'(

I feel uncomfortable :p

The title was a turn-off but I liked the story. Very short.

Well.. I got the Jenny ending, and I think it was a bit too rushed. But again, I think I'll be having nightmares 'bout this..

Cute... I kissed him right away lol

Too rushed. Contents could be much improved.

it was awkward felt like the girls were stereotypical and not good people

not that much choice sadly

The story and details were quite interesting, but I Would like to have had more choices though. It felt like there was very little control over what was happening to my character.
Also the story seems way too short as if it were a rush just to get to the sex part. Perhaps a little more character interaction and development?

Simply horrible. Eating sandpaper is more enjoyable than this abomination of a game.

i feel uncomfortable

its okay, look to other players for advice

Um I think this was written by a pervert little girl who watched too many sex movies. Honestly, learn your stuff

awesome story line for bobby, hits home

Needs more lesbian.

Ehh, no. There was a lot of spelling errors, and the story was absolutely everywhere. I truly think this was made by a virgin 9 year old with no dating experience once so ever, i mean, wtf is a "Thir" And who the hell would ask a (What grade is this in anyways?) Kid still not out of school (understandable if this is college) For a "quicky" right after her sister leaves the room...
no character development, story, mc development, just wtf...

I love it!!

Why did this turn into a somewhat-erotica?

This is a story...

Devoted to underage sex. Seriously?

Uh, This game is weird man. DBZFAN

This story really shocked me man like really it was great but you said sti and not std only thing i caught wrpng with it it other than that it was awsome.

Average. Has potential to be better.

this time it was better

good but a litte wierd

Humana Humana! Mike sounds HOT

Oh c'mon... I need part 2...

@allusional
Or, in the case, a wet sense of humor. XP

Good. Would be 10/10, but it was too short.

Aww the Bobby story was so adorable~! I like that it ended as best friends rather than a romance interest because it was a nice surprise and not what I expected. I like your humor and writing style as well. Very well done~!

I liked it.

Not meaning to doublepost but I hit the submit comment on accident.

Anyway, good job on a first story and I'm going to say keeping it clean from the sexual parts actually helped the story.

A quick but somewhat humorous story about 'First-Times'. I think it would have been better if it had maybe 3-5 pages for each path instead.

That way you can reinforce a readers connection to a particular character and make them feel emotionally connected after the story ends. ^.^

Lollllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz

It's the dry humor and edgy writing that was the best part of the story. I like your style!

For how short it was, the story was very well done; maybe I'm just impressed because it's the best game since April, and doesn't contain any cat porn...

Cool, very good writer. It's short but for a first timer it's very clever

Was good for a short story. Lol Jenny

I loved it! It was funny and cute, and everything went in different directions. It was not predictable, at all! And it was defiantly a lot of fun!! I picked Mike, haha I liked that one ;)