Player Comments on resident evil (my way)

Two Dessert Eagles.
I DON"T EAT EAGLES FOR DESSERT.

Even though I am also eleven, I seem to think that I have much better grammar and spelling than you.

If you don't "chake" him he's bitten, but if you do he's not. I am misunderstanding what "chaking" someone does?
Seriously, though, I get that you made it when you were Eleven, but you uploaded it when you were older, which you shouldn't of. It sucks.

I love Resident Evil! Claire Redfield is my favorite! But your fanfic......

Way too short, bad spelling and no plot. I took into consideration you were 11 and I think you had something good but got bored and finish it. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Dessert eagles? Delicious!

The story isn't too bad, but the spelling is terrible.

The story was actually ok, the main problem was the spelling and grammar which was quite entertaining (I have never been kidden or gone down stires before). It is nice that you wrote an ok zombie story when you were eleven but maybe you can at least update the spelling?

Nice structure, look forward to trying the alternate paths.xxx

"you shoot the zombie and then you ask 'him are you ok'?"

I had a double take on that line.

Where do I begin. First of all even though many, many, many people hated the Resident Evil movies I personally liked them. And you might say: '11302, if you liked the movies you obviously like the games, right?' But to tell the truth, I've never played a single Resident Evil game in my life. Alright, now onto this "story". The grammar is bad. The way you wrote the entire story made it look a five-year-old's idea of literature. You misspell many words in the story and even though you're eleven, you could do waaaaaay better. Here's an example of the grammar used (Yes I did go to the ratings page from a game over page): 'You close you eyes and you are eaten and die' That was the basic description of the game over page I got. Now for the plot. You wake up and hear screams coming from outside. When you check you see zombies and so you go upstairs and (magically) you have a shotgun, 2 desert eagles, and an AK-47 (Only one of these weapons you have ammo for). You basically pick your weapon and aimlessly pick one of the 2 links. In my opinion, this cold have been amazing if you had gotten a co-author, proofread it, and expand it. My final rating for this game is a Christmas list that never got sent to Santa out of 8 (1/8).

If you were 11 when you wrote this, good for you, at least you tried.

Your story still sucks, but you tried

For you being eleven when you created this, I have to say, it's really bad. So many grammer mistakes and spelling errors. It looks as if you threw this together within two minutes. The choices were too obvious. Basically, it sucked. I'm sorry but story writing isn't your job in life. Approximately 1/8. Lol!

Man, oh man. This is like Axe Cop.

Gotta admit. Those desserd eagles were some nifty guns.

Well, congratulations for making a choose your story game when you were so young and all but... Kiddind, stires, weapoins, desserd, comeing and meny... Just saying :p

I disapprove, a lot of spelling errors, short and too easy.

Seth

that was well just terrible

This was TERRIBLE;you haven't used a speck of correct grammar,punctuation or even imaginative vocabulary!

How did someone give you a three just because you included Zombies? This didn't deserve that at all.

What...the...hell?

nom nom nom...

not the best, but 3/8 for zombies.

Bad.Just bad

WTF

i don't care if you're 11. THIS WAS HORRIBLE!!! do you even know how to spell? or use grammar?

Very simple, okay for a first. I fail to see how this relates to Resident Evil in any way though.

this was easy

Ummmm, i suggest putting in a better plot and using spell check...

Somewhat fun but not so exciting

No offense but that was easy, and somewhat idiotic

Don';t rip good game's off. It is a bad idea and it makes everyone think that you're a trie hard. Maybe you should make a quiz...

I cannot use my Kalashnikov on the zomies when I should be able to, like when I've just been rebuked by the army.

Short but it still makes sense at least.

The commenting's stuffing up.

This is even worse than the actual thing. You need to write a bit better. I didn't really like the topic. Keep trying though.

Very short, but fun. Grammar and punctuation could use a lot of work. Decent use of items.

Decent use of ammo and alternate paths.

HA!

This game was great, it has a lot of options which is good and nothing too complicated.

Great work!

xD;; *ran away like a little girl* that was fun!!

fast and easy.

too easy, and you need to finish the game. you stopped it halfway!

man some orther guy is right tis game is horrable

This game is too short and bad spelling

too short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bad fucken spelling it was horr...cool game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's Ok for a small game like this, but a little more effort would be good.

An okay game. You could improve by adding pictures and making the game a bit longer. Geez, even the Laclan's Birthday game is longer than that! If you want some ideas for zombie games, check out 'Zombie Flesh Riot' and my very own games Die Zombie! Die! Parts 1 and 2.

wow i won theres a surprise. it needs to be longer and the choices r pretty easy. like close your eyes and hope for the best or shoot the zombie. what would u choose. put more options in the game and make them a good path to choose and a bad path to choose. but more options

hmmmmmmm...okay--seeing how this is your first game--but still lacking. The story was okay, but too short, and quite pointless. Play Fear's 'Tips for Newbies' located in the educational section.

short and bad spelling but fun

Ummm, it was kind of boring, but hey at least it was a finished game with all links.

fun game a little short thow

The best game ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not long enough to be an adventure really. however, a good start. pay more attention to spelling and sentencing. also, bring more story into it.

Completely Linear and needs better spelling. BUT GREAT FIRST GAME!

The wirdest game i plad all month

one of the best games i played