Player Comments on The Laconia Incident

A beautifully written, gritty and historical story. I loved it!

One of the first endings I got was the true end. I wonder how many people found themselves trying to do the right thing while being on the wrong side of history.

The literary end was also very thought-provoking. The protagonist forcing himself to study the lives of the people he killed felt like the only real way to honor their deaths and atone for it.

I also liked the treacherous end which was a refreshing change of pace. It felt more like an action movie as opposed to the gritty realness of the rest of the branches. It felt like eating dessert after a good meal. XD

There were some very rare instances of SPAG errors. Stuff like "it's" not having the apostrophe or "this" but the "t" is missing. Stuff that might fly under the radar of an automatic spell-checker. The errors were rare and didn't affect my reading experience at all of course, but if you seek perfection, I highly recommend reading your work aloud to spot such errors. It's really effective.

Regardless, this was truly a wonderful experience. I'm glad I took the time to try multiple endings. I highly recommend others to do the same too!

This was obviously well researched, and there is a shit ton of endings. The dialogue is good and believable. The setting was well fleshed out. Never felt more like a kraut.

I got the climactic ending, of course, and wouldn't want it any other way.

I got the Godslayer ending! I'll leave a longer review, but for now I'm just really happy that I finally found the true ending!

History usually isn't my genre, but I really enjoyed this one. Originally, I got the murderous end, but found myself going to find all the others before eventually reaching the true end. What a depressing story.
I didn't notice any SPAG or script errors, good job to Fabrikant.