Player Comments on Where the Clouds Want to Go
Wow. Better than expected and worth reading.
I rather enjoyed reading this. At first, I wasn't really sure what to think about a game based on CandyLand (it isn't normally the type of story I would gravitate towards), and was pleasantly surprised. The game and characters are pretty well written, and the story does seem to draw you forward.
I think that the conflict in the story was well thought out and was resolved in a very "candyland" sort of way (if that makes sense). And there was a good amount of choices and branching within the story.
Overall a nice job, and definitely worth reading.
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DBNB
on 4/11/2024 10:26:21 AM with a score of 0
A short and sweet (pardon the pun) children's story. I love the inclusion of the illustrations! They add personality to this world. I enjoyed getting the cloud blower ending as I think it best tied into the theme of the story.
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MiltonManThing
on 4/9/2024 12:38:57 PM with a score of 0
Got the candycane ending. Gotta say I was not expecting that when I saw this prompt. It was a unique premise that you wrote very well. And the characters were well written too. I'm impressed!
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benholman44
on 3/29/2024 11:59:16 AM with a score of 0
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