Player Comments on .:Icky Boys & Cootie Girls:. *WIP

Solid idea. Impressive that it was an improv. I like it!

It was nice but can you finish this

It was nice but can you finish this

Good story be better if oh if it WAS COMPLETE

I enjoyed this, although short it is cute and I like the innocence of the P.O.V because it gives more of a fresh outlook on a normally quite grown up romantic scene. It would be great if continued.

I don't know how it even got above a -10000000000000000000000000000

Too short but very funny.

Not a bad game, could be longer, probably spend some time working on it so that you don't just leave it forever and not work on it, but yah, good game.

You should continue it i really liked the demo!

this game sucks

I like it so far, although, you could put some more choices.

Its good man you should do more but you shouldnt have dissed the site like that bro

Pretty good, needs to be finished by now

This was a very good story, albeit, I was annoyed at having to pick my gender and the lack of real choices. The writing was very good and make me smile a bit, I doubt a four year old would be thinking like that though. 'Tis a shame you don't seem to be finishing this, as I would love to see it.

boring someone should add actual pictures of the characters.

PERFECT PLZ FINISH

Please finish this. I know you haven't been on for a year, but please.

Well, I liked the story, and I was really getting in to it. But then I was sad when it ended. It'd sure be nice to know how my character ended up.

I thought the story was pretty good. You just need to add more options for each gender so it's more of interact story.

Interesting....

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!! It's totally adorable >o< Seriously, you should totally finish this.STUPID KINDER-GARTEN!!! LOL

D'awhh, this was cute! I'd say if your going to continue it you should have one story branch for the boy and one for the girl instead of making people choose whether they're a boy or a girl over and over.

Dude branch off on a girls story and a dudes so that you can have other choices in game it really lame just reassureing your gender no matter how you word it the same question over and over is really annoying

Pretty short read, and quite nice. Finish this and you'll definitely get a higher rating

Reminds me when I was a YoungManWillakers :D

Very charming, can't wait to see the full ver

The story is cute. Brings me back to my elementary school days. Where it was strange to like girls. Although I did have child crush on a girl in 5th grade

I love the heumer! It brings me right back to Kindergarten. Keep up the good work!

I loved it. The story is cute so far and the writing style is clever and entertaining to read. I'm excited to read more in the future! :)

Good but really short. You should finish it.

What you should do is make separate pages for the boy and girl story line so you don't have to keep asking the reader what gender (s)he is. You can copy/paste the story and just change a bit of the wording. But otherwise I enjoy your writing style pretty funny.

oooh! I liked it a lot. You've got a sense of humor and the writing is great! can't wait for more.

Can you finish it? It's really entertaining! Makes me feel like a kid with no cares instead of a stressed out teen who knows what is lying ahead in the outside world....

I don't rate demo's well. PM when you finish so I can reread and rate. When you unpublish to continue working, make sure you fix the 'you're' errors. You tend to use the contraction where the possessive is needed.

Once the game has a little more choices it will be other wise its a good demo

Not too bad for a demo. I'd enjoy this completed, and if sequels continue the character growing up.

Only one grammar issue- first page: you're instead of your.

My only problem is that you constantly have to refer to your gender. Shouldn't you choose which gender you are in the beginning, and that's that? Introduce some other options! Make the girl have options to be a tomboy or a girly-girl. Make the boy have options to be sweet or naughty, etc.

Otherwise, brilliant for a demo, keep it up. :)

The problem: the only choices are whether you are girl or boy..

For a first story, it's not bad; and I thought the concept was fresh; so keep going with it =)

Okay this writing is fine its not bad, it's the choices that don't make sense. The first choice is basicly choosing whether you are a boy or a girl, but so is the 2nd choice and the third choice, it kinda gets repetitive, just keep it to one, it doesnt make sense if i pick monster trucks then say a icky boy pinched me, making no sense at all lol