Always is a storygame filled with sadness,anger and drama. As the story goes on you will meet new faces and understand the loose ends in the other paths.

Will The Resistance be victorious or fall under the boots of The Hegemony like everything else?

(My first storygame so please be detailed when you criticize.)

A story set in fictional Kingdom of Durzh.
Its about a power struggle between rival families fighting after the death of the young King Urzal IV at the age of 21 and having no children to take his place.

Choose your family and lead your kin to victory or complete ruin.

That guy is pretty old and will probably die in a few years, why jail him in his last years?

Civ series? Star Wars : Empire at war is also a good game, although not turn based.

Sorry my english is not good. I meant it hit the wall behind me and the glass exploded into hundreds of shards.

One time, my mother almost broke a glass bottle on my head. I deflected it by hitting her elbow the last second and it flung right behind my head and blew up right behind me.

IDK if that counts as a ''Near Death Experience''

roger :)

Let me get straight to the point.

-How do i write an astonishing story

-How do i get steady advice

-If you can link me a site about the use of punctuation and grammar

I know i sound demanding but i would appreciate every tiny bit of help :) 

Thanks for the advices! I'll take a look around. :)

I volunteer as a tribute to be a beta reader :)

Well i would like to be a beta reader , although i am new here.

So anything you can tell me about the community or storygames? Any recommendations?