Orange, The Reader

Member Since

11/10/2016

Last Activity

1/21/2017 6:43 PM

EXP Points

61

Post Count

181

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

5 wins / 2 losses

Order

Notorious Marauder

Commendations

2

Hi there, I'm Orange! Oranges are probably at least the fourth coolest fruit so that means that I'm cool, right? Right? Right?!

 

 

 

 

 

All around me hangs a kind of despair
A complete and total loss of all hope
This feeling festers in the winter air
Nothing is to be done except to mope

The deadline runs at incredible speed
Barreling towards me, faster than ever
Yet, I have barely planted the seed
To the site's monthly writing endeavor

With only a week and a half to go
My biggest fear is 'shamed' shall be my fate
As the end date approaches, my fear grows
I hope I won't finish this all too late

My entry for January contest
To finish in time is my only quest

Storygames

The Ballad of the Orchard
The goddess of an orchard has been alone with only trees for company for the last thousand years. Then one day, a little boy comes to her orchard. There is one true ending, you'll know when you find it because it says "true ending."
Forest of Past Voices
unpublished
Elliot hears news that his aunt is dying. He has to trek through a forest haunted by his own memories in order to see her before she passes.
Rhom's Island
unpublished
Rhom is a newborn goddess on her own island. That's all I got for now, I guess. I'm so bad at summaries; I'll fix this when I finish and publish it.

Recent Posts

Draw My Attention (Age of Sage) on 1/21/2017 4:24:33 PM
Thanks, King!
Draw My Attention (Age of Sage) on 1/21/2017 4:19:29 PM
Recommending comment for feature on: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-invasion-of-cyoa The choices of names could've certainly be better. :/ "Smeto" doesn't make much sense, though we know who it is. EndMonster and ThanaPeaches are better because they somehow relate to the original outside of name parodies. There were a few grammar errors, but what really got to me was the tense changing. You 'said' things in past tense, then suddenly, he 'says' something in present tense. The storygame wasn't very funny either. At least for me. Perhaps I'm just not excited by the random type of humor involved in the storygame, but in general, I felt that it was really thin. What they said was equivalent to somebody that keeps swearing thrice per sentence (well, not that annoying); there's no real meaning to it. It doesn't even attempt to help someone understand the site better. While I'm simply not a fan of storygames like this, your writing is pretty good. :D Just need better names and a purpose, and it could be really good! -- Crescentstar on 1/12/2017 10:41:09 PM with a score of 0
January New Frontier Contest on 1/21/2017 3:24:25 PM
I wrote a sonnet about my status on this contest and put it as my profile: All around me hangs a kind of despair A complete and total loss of all hope This feeling festers in the winter air Nothing is to be done except to mope The deadline runs at incredible speed Barreling towards me, faster than ever Yet, I have barely planted the seed To the site's monthly writing endeavor With only a week and a half to go My biggest fear is 'shamed' shall be my fate As the end date approaches, my fear grows I hope I won't finish this all too late My entry for January contest To finish in time is my only quest
Being Inactive on 1/21/2017 12:06:40 PM
I am not a mature member of this site. Heck, I'm not even mature in real life. However, I enjoy writing really slowly and procrastinating on contests. Mostly, I just read games, post in forums that don't pertain to me, and beg for commendations.
B-Day on 1/20/2017 7:14:36 PM
Happy birthday! My 18th birthday is in a little over a month.
Inauguration Day on 1/20/2017 12:51:22 PM
I should be proud that the first of orange-kind was elected president but he's like that weird racist uncle that thinks China invented climate change. Oh wait, he actually does think that climate change was a hoax invented by China. I feel like I'm part of a satire of America.
Possibly replacing for Allegedly a Dragon story? on 1/19/2017 5:48:31 PM
I've written a few songs before but they weren't *good* songs, and certainly not children's songs explaining how to use CYS.
Possibly replacing for Allegedly a Dragon story? on 1/19/2017 1:49:25 PM
Not promising anything good, but I'll try my best to help you out with a song. :)
v20170004 Update on 1/19/2017 12:39:05 AM
Thanks again for all your work, 3J!
Writing Prompt: Week #3 on 1/17/2017 10:57:59 PM
The meaning of life is to crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women. However, the answer to life, the universe, and everything is 42. Nobody really knows the question to the answer 42, but at least we have half the equation.