UmbraKnight180, The Reader

Member Since

3/10/2015

Last Activity

10/13/2015 3:22 PM

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53

Post Count

65

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0

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3 wins / 1 loss

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Hi, I'm Avery. I'm a loner from England and I like wolves.

There isn't really much to say, rather than my brother recommended this site because of my passion for novel writing, and now I guess it's not so bad. He never comes on anymore. I'll have to fix that...

I hope to contribute quality story-games to the site.

I guess I should leave a quote, huh?

"When Life hands you lemons, squeeze them into Life's eyes..." -Me

And here's another just for showing up...

"In the darkness, when all light is gone, when no one can hear your screams, when the silence is the loudest thing you hear, when your heart stops beating, your lungs stop breathing, and the whole world goes still... that is when I'm happiest..." -Me

And just because, here's an original poem by me:

Monster

By: Avery MacDonald

When I was born I did not cry

I lived my childhood a lie

'Cause everything I touch must die

I was born a monster...

In the shadows I must hide

From these feelings deep inside

Swirling like a roaring tide

I truly am a monster...

In the dark I'd like to stay

Safe from prying eyes of day

For your own good, please stay away

Why am I such a monster?

In my agony I drown

As I'm chased throughout the town

'Till finally, they bring me down

I lived and died a monster...

Well, thanks for stopping by. If you want, you can check out my storygames (below)

[TOP SECRET PROJECT!] - very, very active project

The Violet City - very active project

The Rainbow Factory Game - active project (also working on Scratch version)

See ya later!

Storygames

The Violet City
unpublished

Life in The Violet City has never been glorious. You've never known the joy of a weekend, never known the innocence of picking flowers, never known the care-free ways that existed before you. That is, until you find your brother's journal. Inside is a tale about a time before the rule of King Alaster, when people were free and children weren't threatened with death for leaving their homes.

After witnessing the death of your brother in the town square at King Alaster's command, and knowing that your brother's only crime was that he wanted to learn, you start to doubt that the King is really all that "benevolent and merciful" crap that people say he is.

But when you confide in your best friend, he turns his back on you, selling you out to Alaster. Now the King, desperate to keep his hold of ignorance over the people, has started calling you a criminal, and everyone is after you. Your family denies they know you, but it's not enough, causing them to burn with the rest of your home in a rioting rage. Lost, alone, and marked as an outlaw, you make a fateful encounter with a secret society devoted to bringing Alaster down for good. Join the Rebellion to fight for the freedom of the Nation in this exciting post-apocalyptic thriller. The end is near. The time is now. Are you ready?

WARNING: This game contains adult material that may not be suitable for some players. Graphic violence, blood/gore, sexual themes, strong language, and detailed images of material that may frighten younger players are present in this game. Player discretion is advised.


Recent Posts

How to change title color on 6/25/2015 2:33:02 PM

It works! Thanks to you both! ^w^


How to change title color on 6/25/2015 2:32:20 PM

Sorry, Taco, I'm still kind of new at this, and due to my n00b coding skills, I didn't realize you had given me the line I needed. So equal thanks to you both! ^w^


How to change title color on 6/25/2015 2:26:56 PM

Thanks Bradin, you're always a big help. Taco, points for trying! ^w^


How to change title color on 6/25/2015 2:13:48 PM

I don't think you understood what I'm saying. I have the background in place already, that part was easy, but the problem I'm having isn't with the text that you type in the text box, it's the text you put for the title of the page. I can't change that to white. I only need to change that one part. I'm fine with setting the text color to white for the body, there's no problem there. Do you understand now? Or did I miss something?


How to change title color on 6/25/2015 11:06:44 AM

Thanks Taco.


How to change title color on 6/25/2015 11:03:14 AM

Hey guys! It's Avery.

I'm using a dark background for most of my pages, save a few for certain events, and I changed the text itself to white, but I can't seem to get the code I got from the Help and Info section "Creative Title Page" to work. Basically, I took the code, and just deleted the font size script and the font type script, leaving me with only color plus the section where you put the title in.

PAGETITLE

Why isn't it working? Please help!


Someone test my text combo please! on 6/19/2015 10:56:48 AM

thanks I'll remember that. I'm also working on another game called The Violet City. When I'm done with the character creation, I'll put the link in the forums for people to test it. And Im glad you like it, I tried to make it flow smoothly. Glad to know it worked! ^w^


Someone test my text combo please! on 6/19/2015 10:42:45 AM

Ok, I added coding to deal with if Strength or Agility is 0, and restricted the stats so you can't have more than 10 in any particular one. I just need someone to test out the new coding. Here's the link again:

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/rpg-island

Thanks for the help and advice guys!


Someone test my text combo please! on 6/19/2015 10:33:55 AM

ahhh, that's the problem. It wasn't meant to deal with those other stats, assuming that the player would want to have at least 5 in each stat, to sort of balance it out. I should've known better. Thanks!


Someone test my text combo please! on 6/19/2015 10:32:05 AM

hmmm. That could be a possibility....... but I'd really like the player to be able to manipulate the stats so they can have a set of different stats that can enhance the game style. I'll probably just use restrictions to keep them from going over 10 and add a code to display text if the stat is 0, instead of using scripts to make the minimum 5.