eatyourveggies, The Reader

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11/10/2020

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11/29/2020 6:32 PM

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Hello, I am a completely normal and delicious Earth vegetable. You may call me Brocco Li.

(Depicted to the left is an incredibly lewd sex act....but...the humans will never know....)

Storygames

The End of Your Life

Late at night, you're home alone when you hear your dog barking - silenced by a gunshot. They're coming for you next.

An immersive thriller where every movement counts.

There are many ways to die, just a few to survive, and only one ending that explains what's truly going on. Can you find it?

 


Escape the Communists (Post Apoc)
unpublished

You work twelve hours a day on a community farm. Every harvest the food is shipped somewhere else to be redistributed. The system is broken and all of you are on the verge of starvation. To steal a handful of wheat is death. To attempt to escape is death. Somehow you must find a way out.


Invasion of the Broccoli Men
unpublished

Just a silly bit of fun based on a story I wrote with a friend.

 

ON HOLD INDEFINITELY BECAUSE RYAN'S MOTHER WAS A SLOTH AND HIS FATHER WAS A SNAIL

AND HE IS THEREFORE A DISGUSTING HYBRID WITH SLIME COATED FUR

WHO IS VERY SLOW

THAT'S WHAT I'M GETTING AT


Recent Posts

The End of Your Life on 11/29/2020 6:31:33 PM

Well I'll take that all as mostly a good thing, and I hope you'll be able to leave a comment on the story later.

I know it could be better, my writing ability is just nowhere near some of the other authors here. It was supposed to be a much bigger story a couple of friends were going to help me with, but they never got started on their segments so I just worked in the main endings from some of what we planned. 


The hornet's nest. on 11/29/2020 6:26:57 PM

How about instead spending that time gaining knowledge of literally anything else, like something that might even improve your life or help others?


The End of Your Life on 11/29/2020 4:16:27 PM

Hi folks!

I've just published my first storygame: http://chooseyourstory.com/Story/The_End_of_Your_Life.aspx

I've seen stories on this site that just leave me in absolute awe, and I know I can't write anywhere on that level, but if you could find time to read it I'd appreciate if you could leave a comment with your thoughts just the same. It would help me to know if anyone enjoyed it or if there's any obvious thing I need to focus on to improve.

Just a note: you will die a lot. That's by design, the main character starts off in a very dangerous and unfair situation.


v20200005 Update on 11/29/2020 10:28:11 AM

I appreciate all the hard work the admins do to make this site a better place for the people who are actually here to read and write.


The hornet's nest. on 11/29/2020 10:01:12 AM

Hang on, years?

I noticed this site does seem to have an odd effect on certain people, but damn.


So, Thanksgiving. on 11/28/2020 8:30:08 PM

As for other things to be thankful for, I'm glad there are such dedicated people doing pest control here, because I can't help but notice the site has a bad cockroach infestation today.


So, Thanksgiving. on 11/28/2020 6:34:25 PM

This year I ate my veggies, did all of you?

And I was THANKFUL for them too!

Especially for the sweet potatoes covered in melted butter and carmalized brown sugar that I still got to pretend was healthy. And obviously we did not invite any viruses aka my mom's evil sweaty mother.


Best Disney Villain? on 11/26/2020 1:20:05 PM

There being ONE lioness that was loyal to Scar would have been believable. But a group the size shown in the sequel who would also have had hundreds of hyenas with them, it would have been a civil war, and they would have won.


Best Disney Villain? on 11/26/2020 1:13:29 PM

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Best Disney Villain? on 11/26/2020 1:12:25 PM

Ralph Breaks the Internet isn't even available to watch until mid December.